Comments from darthel0101

Date Story title Comment
2014-08-11 16:22:41 If you win? - part 1 The original version has apparently been removed - possibly due to age restrictions.
2012-07-25 13:34:39 Swinging in the Neighborhood Chapter 29 Daddies Revenge This story is what it is - with, or without any element. The power of your story would have been cheapened by the inclusion of diluting elements. I am only sorry to hear you state that you are nearing the end of your story. I hope to see more of your writing in the future.
2012-07-31 03:39:34 Masked magician it needs another chapter - I see promise but no delivery - until I see delivery, I will not vote
2012-08-02 12:57:32 The Camp Nurse I have to agree with SSB, below. This story is worth well more than the rating that is has received. I only wish that there were more of it.
2012-08-03 14:11:35 Sexting my son 1 great leadup - let's hope that the rest of the story takes off from here.