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Comments from darthel0101

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Date Story title Comment
2014-07-18 20:34:26 Galactic Vendetta Chapter 01 There might be some minor grammar issues but nothing which disrupted my enjoyment of the building story. If you are concerned about word usage, my suggestion (from something that I saw elsewhere) would be to re-read the story backwards to prevent your mind from filling in what you expect instead of what you see.
I am hoping to see more of your work in the near future.
2014-07-18 20:31:27 Galactic Vendetta Chapter 01 I am posting this before reading, based on the comment at the beginning of the text.

If the story contains slavery and rape then I would recommend adding those tags to the story even if they do not get incorporated into an individual chapter. This will hopefully prevent somebody who has not read the char list from being surprised when they get further into the drama.

- - - - now, let's find out how you tell a story.
[panting with anticipation]
2014-07-18 20:32:12 Galactic Vendetta Chapter 01 damnable double posting - sorry
2014-07-18 17:41:19 Galactic Vendetta character list and story set up. This promises to be a worthwhile space opera.
I hope that you are able to continue posting soon.
BTW and strictly for information - are you intending this to be simple SciFi story or are you intending an Erotic SciFi environment?
2014-07-18 20:23:24 Galactic Vendetta Chapter 01 I am posting this before reading, based on the comment at the beginning of the text.

If the story contains slavery and rape then I would recommend adding those tags to the story even if they do not get incorporated into an individual chapter. This will hopefully prevent somebody who has not read the char list from being surprised when they get further into the drama.

- - - - now, let's find out how you tell a story.
[panting with anticipation]
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