Comments from darthel0101
|2014-09-01 06:28:08||Being More Social - Chapter 6||Just because I don't like THIS chapter does not mean that I don't like the story.
I am also not going to vote down a story simply because I don't like where the author is apparently taking it. I will wait until he gets to his destination before making the decision to dislike it.
BTW regarding the lists: I rarely use the highest rating list; I use the Latest Updates one.
|2014-08-11 22:20:37||Stepsister Seduction||Good story but the comments apparently need some critique.
She mentioned that she broke her hymen in gymnastics and for the question about diameter -vs.- circumference, I can only think that it comes from one with a pencil-dick. 3" is the measure of my middle finger's circumference.
|2014-07-31 18:44:33||Barn Duty, Night Watch||A suggestion for a way to quiet the grammar nazis. When proofreading your story, read from the end to the beginning. This way, your brain does not overlook typos because you know what you were expecting to write.
MY opinion is that this is free reading material, posted in the internet, and typos should be expected (ESPECIALLY if you are using something like Dragon to turn speech into text). As long as they are not misspelled words (quite when trying to write quiet, etc) then I tend to read right through them.
You are writing a good story and this one shows possibility of a decent sequel; I hope to see more of your work soon.
One more suggestion: if you want critiques from other WRITERS and constructive criticism from readers, post in the forum story section. There are a number of published writers that frequent that area.
|2014-06-29 09:57:33||Cheerleader from Hell||This story was not my normal cuppa, but it was extremely well written for its genre.
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|2014-09-23 15:38:30||A Past new Beginning (The Mission 2)||How many series are you going to work at one time?
Oh, well. If you do as well with this story as you have done with the others then I think I can suffer with them.