Comments from darthel0101

Date Story title Comment
2014-09-01 06:28:08 Being More Social - Chapter 6 Just because I don't like THIS chapter does not mean that I don't like the story.
I am also not going to vote down a story simply because I don't like where the author is apparently taking it. I will wait until he gets to his destination before making the decision to dislike it.
BTW regarding the lists: I rarely use the highest rating list; I use the Latest Updates one.
2014-08-11 22:20:37 Stepsister Seduction Good story but the comments apparently need some critique.
She mentioned that she broke her hymen in gymnastics and for the question about diameter -vs.- circumference, I can only think that it comes from one with a pencil-dick. 3" is the measure of my middle finger's circumference.
2014-07-31 18:44:33 Barn Duty, Night Watch A suggestion for a way to quiet the grammar nazis. When proofreading your story, read from the end to the beginning. This way, your brain does not overlook typos because you know what you were expecting to write.
MY opinion is that this is free reading material, posted in the internet, and typos should be expected (ESPECIALLY if you are using something like Dragon to turn speech into text). As long as they are not misspelled words (quite when trying to write quiet, etc) then I tend to read right through them.
You are writing a good story and this one shows possibility of a decent sequel; I hope to see more of your work soon.
One more suggestion: if you want critiques from other WRITERS and constructive criticism from readers, post in the forum story section. There are a number of published writers that frequent that area.
2014-07-31 17:46:29 She is the One (Part 9) I am really enjoying the story that you are sharing. Keep up the good work.
2014-10-19 02:18:25 Warmth of a Touch by Eric Storm This story rated a negative vote from me because I know for a fact that Eric Storm has requested that every story that he has written be removed from XNXX and he will not give authorization to another to post one of his works here.
This is plagiarism even though the writer is acknowledged.