Comments from Afalbafal

Date Story title Comment
2012-06-13 21:02:10 Daddy's Little Girl I hope you all enjoy!! Please feel free to leave comments and suggestions on what you would like to see happen.
2012-06-13 21:54:55 Daddy's Little Girl Could you try and give constructive critism and offer suggestions on how I could improve instead of completely writing it off as rubbish. That was rude!!
2012-06-13 22:08:26 Daddy's Little Girl Thank you! I appreciate the more detailed critiquing. This is the first time I've ever written a story and I did my best. I learn from feedback. I will try to slow it down and allow for more spacing so the story flows better.