Comments from fingerhut.john
|2012-11-22 23:58:10||Teaching Her Girls How To Fuck(Part 1 The Mother)||good story but does need a lot of work on spelling and grammar|
|2013-07-06 13:49:54||The Spanking||I have to say I was a little surprised. The "i was bad so daddy spanked me" story has been told a thousand times, but I still thoroughly enjoyed this one. Thanks!|
|2013-07-18 16:45:13||Mollested Part 1||I have this story a positive rating despite the many misspellings and other flaws. It is a good story, but I do find iT annoying that the bus is "crowded" yet none if the characters seem to have to hide anything that they are doing. They can suck and fuck as if they are completely alone which takes away from the realism. In the future please keep these types of things in mind before publishing.|
|2013-07-29 08:40:59||A young girl in the bathroom||Nicely done! More please with more character development!|
|2013-08-24 09:22:26||Blackmail Birthday Present (redone)||It always surprises me when an author tags a story with things like blackmail etc. letting readers know that the story has elements in it that are "raunchy," but then get complaints about it. Was he supposed to participate in the black mail but treat her with respect?
In my opinion it should have been more bold. If he was going to be a part of the black mail then she shouldn't have had to convince him to commit zz