Comments from Dawnnie64

Date Story title Comment
2012-07-09 17:21:28 ...And then he kissed me (revised and rewrote) Write a Part 2, PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE!!!!!!!!! This was a GREAT story. Loved it!!!!!!!!!
2012-08-12 04:36:11 The Boy Who Lived Down The Street (Part Two) Post number 3, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2012-08-12 12:44:20 Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 9 Did not like the ending part about Sue. You made the other 8 chapters really good, but this one was the worst. Sorry, but I think you could have done a lot better. SORRY!!!!!!!!!
2012-08-12 14:01:44 Charles Helps His Mother Feel Pleasure Again Chapter 9 Rewritten Now, that is sooooooo much better. Hope one day, you will write us another, just as good. THANKS!!!!!!!!!
2012-08-29 17:34:51 The Boy Who Lived Down The Street(Part Eight) AWESOME story!!! I have said it before, you are a GREAT writer!!! Keep up the GREAT work!!! Can't wait until next chapter, hurry, please!!! Got a question, is this a true story? If not, I sure wished it was, cause some girl would be what I call, LUCKY!!!