|2012-07-10 03:19:16||Feel free to comment on this story plz..I also have a part two to it. I would like to know what you thought of the story.|
|2012-07-10 03:29:45||Just in case you didnt see the previous comment I do have a part two for this story which will finish it off. Would love some feed back|
|2012-07-10 04:09:17||Yeah like I said this is my first attempt i hope Pt 2 is better|
|2012-07-10 20:42:40||Sorry guys the last part was supposed to say
"Hello Bryce." to end the chapter review....
|2012-07-10 21:03:42||That wasnt the intent of the story...She was a bitch to him so he killed her|