Comments from Nitehawk45

Date Story title Comment
2014-03-29 20:02:34 Undesirable Siblings Great little story and enjoyable read.
2014-04-23 22:27:11 So Much Fun on the Bus Great story...on to round 2.
2012-07-18 14:04:00 It would definitely be fun teaching a daughter like her. Good story!
2012-07-18 14:35:26 Tubing A fun float trip for sure!
2012-08-01 11:31:12 a good accident Definitely a good story teller. This is my first story of yours I've read and it's distracting trying to put punctuation in the sentences while still trying to keep what's going on clear. Once you learn sentence construction, where commas and periods go, your attention to detail and step by step progression of events, it'll be fun reading. As evidenced by the length of your story and having only one erotic episode, kind of says you're more into content than strictly fuck/suck stick it where ever stuff. I do think that when you establish where your characters are at, some more good sexual scenes whether short or involved won't hurt. I enjoyed reading your story and look forward to more.