Comments from Gentalman

Date Story title Comment
2012-09-29 01:53:44 Driven Lust Anonymous reader 2012-09-28 20:38:21 Thank you for commenting.

Anonymous reader 2012-09-28 23:45:36 Thank you for commenting.

Anonymous reader 2012-09-29 01:25:45 Thank you for commenting. Your sentence, Really bad.- Fragment, consider revising.
2012-09-30 19:07:49 Driven Lust Thank you everyone for the comments, compliments, and harrassments.
2012-09-30 19:16:58 Driven Lust Another Yard will be complicated. I'm stepping back from it, giving me time to think about its direction.
2012-10-02 17:34:04 Driven Lust III Hunter37 Thank you for your comment and adding me to your favorites.

Anonymous reader 2012-10-01 20:00:37 May you find someone to service you.

Anonymous reader 2012-10-02 01:40:30 AND Anonymous reader 012-10-02 11:42:22 Thank you comenting.

haggas 2012-10-02 16:14:32 Thank you taking the time to read it all.
2012-10-02 17:37:21 Compelled I thought to throw out a story for the holiday. This was quick and rushed. Just something done in a day. The words are a little intricate and some of it doesnt rhyme just right. Please go easy on your critiques.