Comments from Gentalman

Date Story title Comment
2012-11-25 22:42:08 Driven Lust XII [One more chapter]- Thank you for commenting.

(I wasn't so enthusiastic about this as I was of previous chapters.) I'm sorry about that. It is hard to keep it interesting and set up the plot. I'll try to improve.

(you went all out with James' and Cathleen's vocabulary in the first ) It was intentional. Here's the example. You meet someone, you are courteous at first. That person becomes an acquaintence, you loose cordial conversation to casual. As the relationship progresses with you and your new found friend, you become lax around them.

Note when the Prime Minister entered the story line and even that brief encounter showed heavy cordial language. Had James continued a relation with him, his words would become less cordial over time, getting familiar with the person and eventually dropping all cordial for casual conversation.

I intended the relationship to progress by using less cordial words and it helps develop a closer bond between the characters.
2012-11-29 22:05:23 Driven Lust XII [You also called Cathleen Catherine]- just another kink I have.

[Ignore all of the trolls and dicks in the world]- they don't bother me near as much as the website itself. It is buggy and full of disappointment.
2012-11-30 09:49:37 Driven Lust [So much Better than another yard in my opinion.]- Interesting, I get more responses wanting Another Yard completed.

To each their own.
2012-12-04 04:18:21 Driven Lust XIII [darthel0101]- Thank you. I also have an epilogue posted there as well.
I didn't expect the link and was going to wait to post the epilogue when Driven Lust XIII left the Latest list.

I will go ahead and post it.
2012-12-04 12:54:38 Driven Lust XIII This is my final chapter in this story. Additional chapters wouldn't do it justice, I don't think. The epilogue was posted but I can't find it. It is posted in the forum as well as a graphic book cover (Did someone say anime?).

[Turning make to the women protesters, he caved in to their demands]
Changed to: Turning back to the women protesters, he caved in to their demands