Comments from Gentalman
|2012-10-08 18:42:11||Driven Lust V||My! Lots of comments. I certainly appreciate them.
there is no teen male/teen male action here- Thank you for pointing that out. I must have clicked the wrong drop down box. It should be teen male/tean female. My appologies.
Va- Not a fan of chapter subs. Chapter one a,b,c,... shucks, just write a whole chapter.
You're a motherfucker for leaving me hanging- Well, yes I am. I like leaving the chapter on an upbeat cliff hanger. It makes the reader come back, dont you think?
Again, thank you all for your comments, I greatly appreciate your inputs.
|2012-10-09 13:11:37||Driven Lust V||Thanks for the comments.
did you rip it off?-- Nope, brain fart really. I dont know why I keep putting my boss' name there instead of Cathleen. It might very well be wishful thinking. I scanned the document and found eight instances. Even proof reading it, my mind simply didnt catch it. Thanks for pointing it out.
|2012-10-09 16:24:33||Driven Lust V||Look for this in the beginning of the next chapter... James sighed, Lisa, there is no possible way you are going to get that up his ass. thinking how grateful he was not to be Lisas slave.|
|2012-10-13 01:28:19||Driven Lust VI||Sorry, this website won't let me fix the Title. It should be Driven Lust VI. My apologies ahead of time.|
|2012-10-13 01:43:24||Driven Lust VI||Now I notice the word Cathleen has been omitted. I guess when I went to correct my typos, it deleted Cathleen instead of replacing it. Now I'm a little pissy over it. The websire should allow for published editing. Again, I'm sorry. If it looks odd, put Cathleen in front of it.|