Comments from Gentalman
|2012-09-29 01:53:44||Driven Lust||Anonymous reader 2012-09-28 20:38:21 Thank you for commenting.
Anonymous reader 2012-09-28 23:45:36 Thank you for commenting.
Anonymous reader 2012-09-29 01:25:45 Thank you for commenting. Your sentence, Really bad.- Fragment, consider revising.
|2012-09-30 19:07:49||Driven Lust||Thank you everyone for the comments, compliments, and harrassments.|
|2012-09-30 19:16:58||Driven Lust||Another Yard will be complicated. I'm stepping back from it, giving me time to think about its direction.|
|2012-10-02 17:34:04||Driven Lust III||Hunter37 Thank you for your comment and adding me to your favorites.
Anonymous reader 2012-10-01 20:00:37 May you find someone to service you.
Anonymous reader 2012-10-02 01:40:30 AND Anonymous reader 012-10-02 11:42:22 Thank you comenting.
haggas 2012-10-02 16:14:32 Thank you taking the time to read it all.
|2012-10-02 17:37:21||Compelled||I thought to throw out a story for the holiday. This was quick and rushed. Just something done in a day. The words are a little intricate and some of it doesnt rhyme just right. Please go easy on your critiques.|