Comments from Harddick1974
|2013-03-06 22:09:50||A very good story. Only thing I saw that was wrong and its a minor thing is afterwards not after words. All in all it's a great story and I hope for more chapters in the future.|
|2013-03-06 22:42:46||Very good story again so far I have enjoyed every story I have read that you have written. Keep up the good work!|
|2013-03-13 15:14:03||Excellent story! Can't wait til daughter gets back from Geneva
Hope her and Lana can keep daddy busy on the way to Hawaii
Keep up the good work. I am anxiously waiting on the next chapter.
|2013-03-15 06:44:24||I have greatly enjoyed this series of stories. You have inspired me to start my own story. Great writing I hope you keep up the good work.|
|2014-01-09 04:10:31||First Times Part 1||Nice story Sue. You could work a little on your spelling and grammar but all in all good work.
Positive rating from me, kept me hard.