Comments from nousername64
|2012-08-01 10:30:32||Bath time with nanny and her niece||sorry problem with editing the full story is called "Bath time with nanny and her niece (full story)". just click my name to see the full story|
|2012-08-01 10:34:05||Bath time with nanny and her niece||sorry the full story is not coming up under my name. just type Bath time with nanny and her niece (full story) in search and it should be the first story to come up|
|2012-08-01 17:38:20||Bath time with nanny and her niece (full story)||Thanks to the two Anonymous readers for their suggestions on how to improve my story
Yes I really do need to work on my grammar. Next time I write story I will try to make sure the spelling and grammar is a lot better .Thanks Anonymous reader who done Corrections for my story it will be useful for the next time I write story. It a pity xxnx doesnt allow you to edit a story once it is publish.
Thanks to the second Anonymous reader who said it was great concept. It really means a lot.