Comments from theode

Date Story title Comment
2012-10-21 10:35:49 12 yr old Natila Were you 12 when you wrote this story? You have a precision in numbers (0.3 miles away,3.6 inch cock) but reading the story,was like reading a kids essay.
Nice try,could do better.
Don't be put off by my comment,take more time in composing.
Good luck.