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Comments from DaringDad2
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-07-18 21:23:10 | Galactic Vendetta Chapter 01 | Proofreading a story is more for those stories that have no sexual overtones at all. Your story. Is well based and has a good start to it I would like to see more come out soon. Don't let these anonymous critics stop you from writing the more you write, the better you will get. |
| 2014-06-21 13:54:26 | The Mission | Very good start to a continuous story. I look forward to seeing more from you on it. |
| 2014-05-06 16:56:43 | Frontier V | I think that you should keep Carl as mostly good with just a hint of the bad boy in him. Give the girls just a hint of powers and let things progress from there. |