Comments from DaringDad2

Date Story title Comment
2014-07-18 21:23:10 Galactic Vendetta Chapter 01 Proofreading a story is more for those stories that have no sexual overtones at all. Your story. Is well based and has a good start to it I would like to see more come out soon. Don't let these anonymous critics stop you from writing the more you write, the better you will get.
2014-06-21 13:54:26 The Mission Very good start to a continuous story. I look forward to seeing more from you on it.
2014-05-06 16:56:43 Frontier V I think that you should keep Carl as mostly good with just a hint of the bad boy in him. Give the girls just a hint of powers and let things progress from there.