Comments from Ovid58
|2012-10-13 05:55:39||Evelyn, Mary and Lorena||I've been really working hard to try to remember how things have really happened...
Honestly, I've even tried with Google translator to find out what "substinence" means, but, unfortunately, I haven't reached to a result...
Anyway, next time I feel a tickle to write a story, I shall try to remember to divide it in a lesser number of paragraphs.
|2012-10-14 08:39:08||FANNY||No, you're perfectly right!
I am Romanian, was born and lived almost all my life in Romania.
Anyway, I've been trying hard to respect the English grammar, but of course I will always recognize a guy who speaks Romanian, but his native language is a different one...
Anyway, I can assure you that I'm just doing my best!
|2012-10-14 14:45:09||The Girl Of His Best Friend||I liked your story, but, as a strange coincidence, we have the plot here, in Romania, as a very popular joke!
The difference is that the lady is a teacher, the guy is a student of hers, and the guy who calls her later at home is the manager of the school, who has sent to her, via the student, her salary!...
But, in rest, the description of her feelings, doubts, and so on are OK with me.
|2012-10-19 05:47:34||My girlfriend chapter 1||Look, I really have nothing against your story.
After all, you've taken your time to write and post it...
My only problem is that the description of the events has nothing to do with something that has really happened!
|2012-11-12 06:07:23||Sleeping on the couch||I didn't vote, since I don't want to spoil your ranking - anyway, please be more careful - just as the anonymous reader has already said, you switch between third person and first person in a way that really makes things hard to follow...
On the other hand, you've mentioned that this is a true story...
You were a virgin, but the girl who has punished you to sleep on the couch is no virgin - still, you know from the way she answers to you that she's masturbating...
Who is she? A member of your family?!?
Sorry, but, as a virgin, you just seem to know too much!