Comments from lesleyeroxanne

Date Story title Comment
2012-10-09 04:59:01 little sister and me enjoyed the story. Don't give up on writing...learn as you go. Practice makes perfect and a good Enlish book helps.
2012-10-09 05:14:56 Mommy Tries To Resist Enjoyed, but you should priof read better. Would be nice to have some the exrotia foreplay and more discriptive details of settings. Keep the work and write more.
2012-10-09 05:35:20 While Parents Are Away The Kids Will Play Excellent, my imagination is on fire. Hope you will continue.
2012-10-15 03:54:01 Chooks Mum I enjoyed the story.