Comments from lesleyeroxanne

Date Story title Comment
2012-10-09 04:59:01 little sister and me enjoyed the story. Don't give up on writing...learn as you go. Practice makes perfect and a good Enlish book helps.
2012-10-09 05:14:56 Mommy Tries To Resist Enjoyed, but you should priof read better. Would be nice to have some the exrotia foreplay and more discriptive details of settings. Keep the work and write more.
2012-10-09 05:35:20 While Parents Are Away The Kids Will Play Excellent, my imagination is on fire. Hope you will continue.
2012-10-11 18:26:30 CAMPING WITH MOM I truly enjoyed the romantic character of the story. It was so real in the moide I have been today. Ecdellent flow and gramma a plus... but a little more proof reading it would be perfect. Thank you
2012-10-12 05:37:48 CAMPING WITH MOM I came back to correct my errors because I was interrupted before I could finish. I take my reviews serious and yes there is a minor error, but it does not distract from the flow and/or the story. It is still beautiful and well done.