little sister and me
||enjoyed the story. Don't give up on writing...learn as you go. Practice makes perfect and a good Enlish book helps.
Mommy Tries To Resist
||Enjoyed, but you should priof read better. Would be nice to have some the exrotia foreplay and more discriptive details of settings. Keep the work and write more.
While Parents Are Away The Kids Will Play
||Excellent, my imagination is on fire. Hope you will continue.
||I enjoyed the story.