Comments from animal99

Date Story title Comment
2014-07-20 20:35:13 My Girlfriends Daughter VERY NICE! I truly am surprised to find a story of an older man obsessing over a young girl who still takes the time to make love to her rather than hurry to get his rocks off using her body.

A Very Good story - I will be on the lookout for more of your stories :)
2014-07-19 16:43:36 The Slut Within: Recovery WOW! You have quite an imagination, and I love your story for it's unique take on Mom-Son themed stories.

You certainly made a tired out old subject into something new and interesting to read.

Ruth be told, there were moments when I felt a little bored but the background details really were a necessary part of the story and were not the HURRIED style of other stories like this found on this forum written on this same genre.

With your unique spin, I would be interested in reading a sequel to this story, perhaps about his (sex)life with CINDY post marriage? Good Story, Please keep writing!
2014-07-14 06:36:51 My Return from College I really enjoyed your story but those many typo's and wrong words just kept snapping me out of my enjoyment of your story.

Please fix these mistakes... and the other reader is right -you need to check your work before you post your stories.

It is a tragedy to see such good work made to look bad with such trivial proofreading efforts.
2014-07-14 20:12:34 My hot stepsister part 1 Good story, and if it is a True story... congrats!

I wasn't too keen on your ending... "The End." or the parts that came after that. i think you should just end the story, and if you have anything more to add - just make a new paragraph with this info but separate it with dashed lines or something, so we don't think it's part of your story.

Really good story.. I would like to see a new chapter, taking place some time after this first one. I'm particularly interested in how your sister behaves in her new adventures with you. (No more adventures in RL? make some up! :)
2014-04-14 06:48:33 My Oral Audition – story 13 this was a good story..but a few mis-typed/misplaced words kind of broke the spell for me. reRead your stories before posting... and this could be a Great story :)