Comments from stoneface1188
|2012-10-23 12:19:40||Pranali||bro thank you very much for the advice...
actually I am posting this story from a moblie thats why this problem happend I bymistakely posted the half story...
and yeah accept my foolishness and also my story was very long
here il take your advice divide the story in two parts and again publish it.
thank you again
|2012-10-23 12:26:03||Pranali(edited)||Thank you very much who ever has given this story a positive response its my first story though I couldnt complete as the site doesnt allow more than 5000 letters I vl back divding the story in two parts and then u will enjoy the full story|