Comments from xilix
|2012-11-24 09:24:45||Diary of a Slave Merchant - 2007||Good story. I enjoyed it, even with the few typing errors i;e name switches.
Only complaint I would have, I thought you were too soft in some parts. Allowing a slave concessions is allowing them a modem of control.
I am looking forward to the rest of your stories.
|2012-11-26 17:24:04||A Good Fucking Night Part 1||Nice. I miss the high school days of uninhibated mayhem|
|2012-11-26 17:43:44||A Good Fucking Night Part 2||Well done. Off to read the next chapter :)|
|2012-12-09 16:17:56||Broken Birds, Part 3, Bonding||Thoroughly enjoyed this so far. Have a feeling I will end up reading the entire series in one sitting :)|
|2014-09-30 01:29:26||The Devil's Pact Chapter 34: The Whore of Babylon||I would have given this a positive rating, but the anti-gun sentiment ruined it. Also ruined any desire to read any more of what had so far been an enjoyable series.
As you clearly illustrated, later in this chapter, Mankind will ALWAYS find a means to kill each other. The "let's blame the gun" mentality is getting old!