Comments from theblackknight
|2012-12-06 18:23:25||Chris and Christie||Forgot to log in the first time....
Thanks for the feedback folks, I really appreciate your compliments. I'm working on some other stuff, but this one I felt more compelled to write, simply because I like the characters, and wanted to make them likeable. Some other ideas I have in mind, the characters are more shallow and self-centered, or just plain mean, so I'm not really sure how well the story will turn out.
|2012-12-28 23:14:21||Tommy's fuck toy||Thanks for.the honest feedback. The funny thing is, Chris and Christie was a total work of.fiction, whereas this one is actually based on people that I know and their stories.
Being new to.the writing thing, I'm discovering that writing about sex is a lot harder than I thought it would be, as was writing from a woman's point of view.
The funny thing was, Chris and Christie seemed to.write.itself, whereas my other stories, like this one, are considerably much harder going.
My other concern is that I won't be able to come up.with anything as good as my first offering, but I'll keep.trying.
|2013-07-14 14:48:53||Substitute dad pt.1||Whoops, guess I need to work on my editing. Name should be Todd.|
|2013-07-24 14:45:14||The unwitting third wheel or Hailey's story||That one is in progress.|
|2013-08-17 20:30:13||Soccer Mom Slave (repost)||Great story, loved the twist at the end.|