Comments from ZondarTheBear
|2013-05-03 19:00:32||Oops, I Fucked My Cousin.||Thank you for you kind words about my writing abilities, nice words like that are the reason that I continue to post here, in spite of the...negative aspects...that some 'critics' continue to emit.
I'm curious as to why that particular euphemism for the female anatomy is receiving such a strong negative reaction. As I mentioned earlier, the word is an accurate slang term for the time and place of the story setting. The Seventies was a much more innocent time, all things considered, and youngsters using the word 'pussy' or 'cunt' just wasn't done.
But be calmed, the word most likely won't make an appearance in my future stories because the don't take place in that era.
|2013-07-03 01:14:55||It sounds like you've been looking for a very specific story, and you've been disappointed in your search. Tell you what, If you send me a PM that gives me an exact story-line that you want to read, I will write it just for kay. I'll let you read it before I post it and you and I will work on making it the exact story that you want. If it comes out good enough, I'll publish it on the web and give you contributor status in the credits.|
|2013-07-12 21:55:54||Times in my Life : Part Two||This is an amazing story, for a first timer or for someone who has been writing for awhile. The dialogue is a bit stilted sometimes, but it doesn't detract from the overall sweetness of the story. With a bit of editing, I could see this story being published as a 'for pay' story. I wouldn't mind including it in the lineup at Zondar's House of Weirdness.|
|2013-08-05 02:20:25||Nurse Nice/Nurse Nasty||21:33:07 Thanks for your kind words. I've spent many many years observing the work of all kinds of medical professionals, and you're right, they get shit on just about every place that I've spent time. As I was writing the story segment, in my head the nursing student had limited experience in a real world setting, but even she saw what was dumped on the overworked medical staff in her section. I'm going to do my best to tell this story with as many accurate medical setting details as I can, but I'm sure that the erotic nature of the tale will force me to...stretch things...in order to get the boners twanging and the love buttons twitching, so please be patient with my twists and turns.|
|2013-08-15 13:49:36||My Daughters Best Friend Pt 1||A nice story. There's a bit of word repetition (you should find more words for 'pussy', repeating words over and over and over can jerk a reader out of the story. Other than that, it was a really nice read.|