Comments from ZondarTheBear
|2013-01-30 23:30:38||Jack (chapter 1)||A very nice story. I look forward to part two.|
|2013-02-02 03:25:19||Hellooooooo there! Part two is up and running (actually, its just kind of sitting there, but you know what i mean.) Click on my name at the top of the story, its a link, honest, it'll take to to my page and stuff.|
|2013-02-16 12:17:25||Google Dictionary: Prologue: a preliminary discourse; a preface or introductory part of a discourse, poem, or novel.
Some authors use a prologue to begin a story, I use it to tease the reader with a snippet from the story. Either way is fine.
You are clearly in possession of an angry heart and a small mind. I hope that when you finally end your miserable existence, you do so in a way that leaves as small a mess to clean up as possible, because its only polite.
And thank you for the spelling lesson, my world is ever so much better. (In case you didn't get it, that was sarcasm.)
|2013-02-17 01:34:58||So, let's see here. If you say something stupid once and get told that you should die a stupid death in your mother's basement, the obvious thing to do is repeat yourself two more times.
Yeah, that's going to get people to listen to you. Moron.
Anonymous reader 18:17:56...if you want to tell a world class writer that he should stop writing, then you might want to work on speaking English. I can read a three hundred page book in twenty minutes, and it took me three to understand what the fuck you were trying to say with your garbled 'review' of my work.
You have an obvious defect in your frontal lobe, you might want to get that checked out by a professional
21:34:55...Thank you for your kind words. You don't have to worry, I am virtually immune to the mouth-diarrhea of trolls and morons; I could no sooner stop writing than I could stop breathing. Keep an eye out for part two coming soon.
|2013-02-17 22:01:45||Oh, no! A random troll on the internet, who hasn't got the sack to identify itself, has said mean things about a story that I wrote.
Whatever shall I do? :eyeroll: