Comments from Clayton Long

Date Story title Comment
2009-04-28 08:26:44 Wedding Orgy A pretty hot story but I think it could have been improved by giving more of a sense of what you were feeling at the time. Still, it did make me hard and that's always good.
2009-04-28 09:16:58 A cruise to remember Totally hot story, loved every moist, cum-soaked inch of it.
2009-05-09 13:48:03 WIFE CAUGHT AND PAYS Not worthy of a comment - not even this one.
2012-06-04 22:29:33 My Fathers Boss Quite well written, hopefully will develop well with different combinations in further chapters. But why so many categories? Latex fetish, masturbation, exhibitionism, cuckold?? Less is sometimes more.
2012-11-17 01:19:09 Coquette and her cuckold (Part 4) Although I posted this under 'True Stories' it is, I must admit, not entirely true. Certainly part 4 is entirely fictionalised and the story should not be taken as condoning murder in any circumstance.
As Hollywood often describes it's movies, it is "based on actual events" but as I continued writing, I took the liberty of embellishing some parts to improve the narrative (hopefully).
I added the murder in order to round out the story and supply a hopefully surprise ending.
Although I use the first person, my writing should be seen as no more supporting lethal retribution than, say, an Agatha Christie novel.