Comments from Mr. Universe
|2013-03-25 00:42:14||My Mom's hot friend||My next story will be out in a few days, for those that want to know it will be call My Mom's Hot Friend Part 2 An Unexpected Visitor.|
|2013-04-03 12:36:55||My Mom's Hot Friend Part 2 An Unexpected Visitor||I am using paragraphs, I'm pretty sure you're talking about spacing between each line.
That is not proper writing technique. If you read an actually novel you'll notice that there is only spaces like that when there is a change of characters. So I will continue using proper paragraphs and you can go read someone else's stories if you don't like it.
|2013-04-05 13:49:02||My Mom's Hot Friend Part 2 An Unexpected Visitor||I revised this story and added more details when I described aunt Sarah so please go to my profile page and read that one instead of this one.|