A Rock and a Hard Place 2
||@anon lol I've been waiting for someone to bring that up. At the same time I'd like to know what college you went to that makes you so haughty as to judge another person's actions?
A Rock and A Hard Place 3 (Conclusion)
||@anon I'm assuming you are "K". Whether or not I am correct I thank you for your feedback. If something interesting happens in their story I may decide to just make this the third edition rather than a conclusion so keep your eyes peeled! Also I will be writing again I just got side-tracked with some business I am starting a new series and I don't want to give too much away before I post it but it's entitled "I Caught Mom, Or did She Catch Me". Its based on a power struggle as you might imagine. I'm looking forward to your critique. Have a great day!
I Caught Mom! Or Did She Catch Me
||@K If I'm to be honest with myself I would admit that you're right about the sister scene but you never know there could be more coming *hint hint* to atone. Oh and the next one will come out today so you won't be drowning for long. From Jr. High I've been fascinated by the work of Freud and the Oedipus Complex so that could be the reason for the mother/son elements in my stories. And as always thank you for your kind words and criticism I'll be looking forward to your response on the next installment
I Caught Mom Or Did She Catch Me 2
||@anon what are you talking about when you refer to the word "coach" could you please point out these proofreading mistakes and what you are confused about, because this story made much more sense than your ramblings