Comments from Are_You_Sure?
|2013-04-06 22:50:14||My Mom's The Best!||Reading my own story, it's almost embarrassing to see the grammar fails that I never revised. I do appreciate the feedback, even the negative ones.|
|2013-04-06 22:54:14||My Mom's The Best!||Oh, and to the people who think I'm a child, If I was, I probably wouldn't know what the hell sex was, let alone write about it.
I rushed the writing of this story and when I published it, I didn't proof-read.
|2013-04-13 12:41:54||My Mom's The Best! [Pt. 2]||@Anonymous reader
"All these idiots like is the sex. You need to slow the story down with some more details like what she's waring what you two do on a daily basis,got to have more details if not all the fools on here would write stories. Without details someone like me who proofs for a living ,your story reads like this example ( I walked in on my mom masturbating , she then let me fuck her the end)details details details make a good story even short ones"
Okay, first off, that comment had a lot of grammar issues.
Secondly, I will try to Improve on that, and I do promise my third story will be better. Thanks for the feedback!
|2013-08-12 01:17:52||What did you say? [ Part 3 ]||Spoiler: This is all a dream. Not Continuing. New series TBA.|