Comments from Barbarian Dogwoggle

Date Story title Comment
2009-09-24 03:58:33 My sister, the Bitch (was taken down i found it) It hasn't been taken down. It's #2 on the most read list. Still a great story though...
Most of the best stories are on the first two pages of the most read list.
2009-09-23 11:39:41 The too small airline seats Sorry. It's a formatting error. I'll see if it can be fixed.
2012-07-04 14:43:00 Babysitting the Twins Again - Part 3 - Jenny's Halloween Sleepover "good job except the part when the girls tie the twins up id leave that out for part 4"

I want each part to be a complete stand alone story, so I couldn't really do that. Lucy and Sally are the real stars of Part 3.

"part 4 come on just one more chapter pleaseeeeee"

I had not planned a Part 4. What do you want part 4 to be?
a) Twins help Jenny and Debbie get a little sister?
b) More with Alice and her friends (or enemies)?
c) An explicit story based one one of the epilogue sections?
d) Something else with current characters?
e) Something else with new characters?
2012-07-09 04:23:02 Babysitting the Twins Again - Part 3 - Jenny's Halloween Sleepover OK. I've got a plot line for part 4 using (a). It starts something like this:

Twins have taken lots of very interesting photos of Jenny.
Twins give copy of 100 best to Jenny and she puts on her computer.
Jenny has password protected screensaver, but when she runs for school one morning, she fails to activate screensaver expecting it to time out soon enough.
Her father sneaks into her bedroom quickly, finds photos and makes memory stick copy of all photos.
Father puts pictures on his computer and keeps it locked up well.
His automatic backup copies photos to family archive disk.
Father jerks off a lot looking at Jenny's pictures.
Jenny's very conservative 42 year old mother snoops on backup disk and finds all.
All hell breaks loose!!!
2012-07-28 06:15:28 Jessica's Scarf and the Old School Copier !!!! TAKE NOTE !!!!

This story has been revised and significantly improved. Please read newer version.

Revised version: Much improved and 10% longer
--- fixed spelling, verb tenses, improved wording, sex scenes extended, more dialog,…

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