Comments from Panther68

Date Story title Comment
2014-06-13 02:02:53 Sis Comes Home for For Memorial Day A Year Later - Part 1 I am sorry for the delay, but I have had a bit of a writter's block. Some new ideas came to me last night and am now ready to finish the next part.
2014-07-01 14:58:59 Sis Comes Home For Memorial Day - Part II Perhaps the person who wishes to critique my grammar skills should take a look at your own comment. Look up rules concerning capitalization.


1. the first word of a sentence.
2014-09-18 02:38:34 Each Weekly Visit -- Chapter I: When It All Began Great to see you back writing again
2014-01-19 14:32:10 Senior Year - Parts 3, 4, 5, & 6 Glad you enjoyed it. How was it a bit confusing to you? It might help me when I write my next story.

I would like to write a sequel to "Sis Comes Home for Memorial Day." It probably won't be next in line. I have one in mind that I would like to write first that I hope well send a message to someone special to me.
2013-05-04 20:08:23 This was a great story. I found the progression of events to be very natural. I usually do not care for bestiality, but I was totally acceptable to the way it was presented here. I am working on writing a story that that shows the development of a relationship between an older male (40's) with a younger woman (20's) which is non sexual for a large portion of it. This story gave me hope that mine will be accepted here. Keep up the good work!!!