Comments from Panther68
|2014-06-13 02:02:53||Sis Comes Home for For Memorial Day A Year Later - Part 1||I am sorry for the delay, but I have had a bit of a writter's block. Some new ideas came to me last night and am now ready to finish the next part.|
|2014-07-01 14:58:59||Sis Comes Home For Memorial Day - Part II||Perhaps the person who wishes to critique my grammar skills should take a look at your own comment. Look up rules concerning capitalization.
1. the first word of a sentence.
|2014-01-19 14:32:10||Senior Year - Parts 3, 4, 5, & 6||Glad you enjoyed it. How was it a bit confusing to you? It might help me when I write my next story.
I would like to write a sequel to "Sis Comes Home for Memorial Day." It probably won't be next in line. I have one in mind that I would like to write first that I hope well send a message to someone special to me.
|2013-05-04 20:08:23||This was a great story. I found the progression of events to be very natural. I usually do not care for bestiality, but I was totally acceptable to the way it was presented here. I am working on writing a story that that shows the development of a relationship between an older male (40's) with a younger woman (20's) which is non sexual for a large portion of it. This story gave me hope that mine will be accepted here. Keep up the good work!!!|
|2013-05-28 07:08:18||Sis Comes Home For Memorial Day - Part I||Thanks everyone for the positive votes and encouraging comments. Part II is in work and should be ready in a few days. This is my first posting. It takes longer than I thought to take all those ideas and and put them down in words.|