Comments from Panther68
|2013-05-29 17:18:57||Sis Comes Home For Memorial Day - Part I||This story has received 22 negative votes, but all comments have been positive. Please if you're gonna vote negative let me know why. I can't learn if I don't know why you don't like it.|
|2013-06-04 08:01:52||Sis Comes Home For Memorial Day - Part II||Thanks for the encouraging comments. Since the number of votes only reflect a little more than 1% of the total of number of times it has been read, I can't use the rating accurately to see how well it has been received. Part II played out a little differently than planned. I rewrote it twice which is why it took longer to post than I thought it would. Part III was originally planned to be the conclusion but the changes in this part inspired some events I'd like to add which would present an option for a spinoff story in addition to 2 other stories I have planned. Again thanks for the comments.|
|2013-06-04 23:40:21||Sis Comes Home For Memorial Day - Part II||Thanks very much for the fine and honest comments. After reading it a few times after I had posted it, I spotted some of the errors you probably saw. I think some were a result of rewriting a sentence or paragraph and not reading it completely again. A few I spotted I don't know how the heck they got in there. Bottom line though is I had proof read it better I would have caught many of them. I did proof read it before I posted it, I however I did immediately after I had the story completed the way I wished and then posted it. Lesson learned. Once I think the story is ready to post, I should probably walk away from it for bit and then proof read it. Rookie mistake I guess.|
|2013-06-05 08:05:15||Sharing a room with sister||Very nice story. I could imagine some of the same interaction between the brother and sister in my current story if they had given in to their desires when they were teens. When Jordan confessed her love for her brother it read almost the same as mine. I hope nobody thinks I took it from yours. I hope you continue posting.|
|2013-06-20 07:39:50||Sis Comes Home For Memorial Day - Part III||Just wanted to let those waiting for part IV, that I should have it done tonight or tomorrow night at the latest. I've had a few matters that delayed my working on it and then once I did start working, I found that some parts required wording to be very careful. Thanks for your patience.