Comments from Casshernsins
|2013-06-14 11:37:04||Weird things, Succubus.||ok so as this is my first posted story here and still learning as i go as all can see i'm not that a great a writer but hopefully good enough people like it anyway.
I have other ideas to expand this story and well I might continue it if people like it or I might move on trying some thing else story wise.
|2013-06-14 18:47:31||Weird things, Succubus.||from the mistakes that are pick i learn from them hopefully be better next time round i go back over this.|
|2013-06-16 08:31:26||Weird things, Succubus.||Ok I have gone back over this story hopefully I caught some of the mistakes.
I have altered some of it as some of the ides did not work as well as I came up with.
It not to drastic a change now I hope the changes help the story.
On words and upwards on improving.
|2013-06-16 08:37:16||Weird things, Succubus.||Not sure how long it take to get a reply about the editing a posted story so just keep your eyes peeled for revamp.
I'm working on next part so i take my time learn lesson from first part, all reading will be up some time during the coming week.
|2013-06-20 20:22:11||Weird Tales, Succubus. Part 1.||As I have said edited it hope it read better that my first attempt.|