Comments from HoneyGirl12
|2013-08-20 22:35:43||Home on Leave||Thank you all for your views and ratings, and especially the comments.
They are all appreciated, and I want to apologise to both the annoyed commenter and anyone else offended by my story, you may notice i like to be descriptive of their interactions up to a point, but i prefer to use broad general terms such as 'they make love' to allow readers to fill in the undescribed section with their own fantasy.
I hope that clears up some of the problem you had with it.
The story will possibly continue, but it will not become much more graphic, the story is about finding someone you knew and recapturing a lost opportunity.
She wasn't a 'bar slut' as you put it, rather a lonely girl with little going well for her who met the man she had missed for years.