2015-05-14 16:16:07 |
The Second Place Sister: Ch. 10
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@catmandue53 thanks so much. I just did it for fun, because I had a story of these 2 sisters stuck in my head. It came out better than I expected, even though it's hardly perfect. I really appreciate you taking the time to read it. |
2015-05-14 16:31:33 |
Taken by my Brother
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Fun little story, and sold writing. Hope to see a second part. |
2015-05-08 17:32:32 |
The Second Place Sister: Full Text
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@anonymous Thanks for the catch. Not sure how that happened. The final draft didn't have it that way. It's been fixed. You're awesome! |
2015-05-08 16:01:04 |
The Second Place Sister: Full Text
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@Anonymous Thanks for the feedback. I took it to heart and reupped the story broken into segments to be kind to mobile readers. |
2015-05-06 11:38:16 |
The Second Place Sister: Full Text
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read it and comment. Part 2 is well under way. @countz I did consider the idea of breaking up into multiple submissions, but when I read something on here, I hate having to go back and find the next chapter. The story is already broken up into chapters, just not multiple submissions. |