Comments from jdm320

Date Story title Comment
2014-01-02 16:12:07 4 Years Forward This could be a hot story, but it is very hard to read because of the lack of structure and pronunciation.
2014-01-24 18:45:11 My True Childhood Experience oh the sweet innocence of youth. nice little story.
2014-02-03 21:04:41 The Diary of a Girl Learning Obedience pt. 1 - The Orchid A very erotic story. The details were so good. I could see the scenes play out in my mind from the descriptions given.
2014-02-03 21:15:34 The Diary of a Girl Learning Obedience pt. 2 - The Orchid (The Day After) very nicely written. This reminds me of a recent experience. Raw animalistic sex, its the best kind.
2014-02-04 20:59:31 "A Worthy Detention" Student and Principal typical..nothing erotic about this story at all.