My 25 year old step sister
||I am sorry. I tried to read this story but the lack or punctuation, paragraphs and all the spelling errors distracted me.
Little Preteen Toy
||Was hot until I read she was 8, that is very young. As for your writing, there were a few spelling errors, but not too many to take away from story.
New Princess In Trade For Old
||hot little story. I hope this is not the end. A few spelling errors and switch from 1st person to third then back to 1st Would have liked to have seen better description of Stephs body.