Comments from TeenWiz

Date Story title Comment
2013-10-10 04:52:23 Careful what you wish for Thanks..I'll keep that in mind.
2013-10-13 03:22:37 She had to do it I wasn't aware of my good instincts, thanks. I will be grateful if you tell me where I went wrong.
2013-10-13 11:42:34 She had to do it I am pleased that someone got off reading this, gives me the spirits to write the second part.
2013-10-14 08:16:37 She had to do it In my own opinion, I think that grammar to some extent defines a story. I think that is why I fell bottle-necked by my grammar, which I am trying to improve. Anyway, I am writing the second part and I am truly appreciative of your corrections and comments.