Comments from Hellcat41979

Date Story title Comment
2014-07-08 12:03:45 The maintenance Man 3 I have to back the other commenters about continuing the story and making the chapters a little longer. Other then that I have no complaints.
2014-07-20 21:26:06 Galactic Vendetta Chapter 01 I wish to thank everyone that commented on the story and I must respond to two. It is not my intention to fill the void that Ka Hamed left. Someone else must step to do that. My only intention is to tell a story the best I can.I leave the job of creating literary masterpieces to others.
2014-07-19 06:18:58 Galactic Vendetta Chapter 02 I hope you enjoy this series as it just seems to be flowing from me. However I must be taking a brake to handle a few things the next couple days so I may not get part three out as speedy as I did these first chapters. Thank you for all the nice comments and I will try to get the next part out as soon as I can.
2014-04-10 20:25:57 Life of Mary The biggest thing you could do is work on your spacing between paragraphs. A sold block of print is hard to read. I also agree you should go into a little more detail also. I think it has potential and would like to see more.
2014-04-14 05:13:30 Revenge, Pt 8 : Name Games Please continue this great story. The only thing that could be improved on it is to add some lesbian action. Say the friend the sister is trying to set him up with.