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heres a story i wrote up, its not really that great and i only did one draft so there is probably many typo's/spelling errors but i figured i'd let everyone be the judge of it.

It was late afternoon, about seven o’clock on a cool and rainy Saturday in august. I had nothing to do that night so I chose to relax at home and play piano for a while. As I was ascending my favorite “D scale” as my mother walked into the living room where I was playing; She told me that she would be attending a party at the neighbor’s house six blocks down our quiet suburban street. I gave her a quick and muffled “yep, sounds good mom” as I tried my hardest to concentrate on my fingers dancing on the ivory. My mom, who was a bit annoyed at the lack of enthusiasm in my response shook her head and said “your going to have to pick me up because it is raining really heavily out and I don’t want to drive because I plan on drinking.” I nodded, “yep, sure mom just call me when you want a ride.” She gave me a quick goodbye and told me to enjoy my night. I waited for the front door to close and watched my mother walk down the street. I became very excited because I was finally home alone, my father had gone on a work trip for the weekend and wouldn’t be back until late Sunday night. I went upstairs to my computer at eight thirty because I had gotten bored of playing the same few songs on piano. I logged on to facebook and myspace and scrolled through friends profiles, nothing new or interesting. By nine thirty I had decided that I had at least two more hours before my mom would call so I went to my favorite porn sites, such as “” “” and “” As I watched a very sexy video of an Asian women giving an amazing blowjob, I took my penis out and began rubbing it. I enjoyed this video so much I was ready to cum at one minute and forty-five seconds on my third time viewing it. I began to fuck off very fast, rubbing the head quickly and then sliding all the way down the shaft. About a minute later I was about to cum when my phone rang, my mother… she already needed a ride home. I turned off the computer and zipped up my pants. As I walked down the stairs I was very disappointed that I didn’t get to finish. I got my keys and threw on a sweatshirt and went out to my grey Toyota Carolla. The rain fell down upon the windshield making a pleasant sound as I coasted down the road, my dick was still somewhat hard. It was only a five minute drive to the house where my mother was, as I pulled into the driveway I called my mom, she answered “ okay I’ll be out in a minute.” I waited and listened to the radio, thinking about the Asian woman’s ample chest and gorgeous round ass. I watched as the front door opened and three women walked out into the downpour; one being my mother, the second my neighbor Rachael, and the third was a woman that I did not recognize. I greeted them as the entered the car, the smell of wine was prominent. My mom introduced my to the stranger, her name was Megan and she was new to the neighbor hood. As I glimpsed backward to say hello to Megan in the rear passenger seat I noticed that she was wearing a white shirt that had become very wet in the rain, she was wearing a red lace bra that was very visible through the saturated t-shirt. My mom exclaimed “ thanks for picking us up honey, I hope you don’t mind driving these two as well.” I replied “ sure that’s not a problem.” I took my time backing out of the driveway because Megan’s breasts were in my direct field of vision, they were extremely large the wet shirt was tightly pressed against them. I could see every detail from her boobs to her flat stomach. As we cruised down the road at thirty-five the women chatted about the party, about cloths, and shopping… all that boring girl stuff. I realized that they were all drunk because they had all commented on how handsome I was; I gave a quick smile and laughed, my mother always has to brag to everyone, even if I wasn’t good looking at all she would somehow get all of her friend to agree that I was. First I dropped off Rachael, she lived the closest. I said goodbye and she thanked me for the ride. I planned on dropping Megan off next but as we neared my road my mother asked if I could drop her off at the house because she needed to use the bathroom. As my mother got out Megan moved up to the passenger seat. The view of her enormous natural breast was amazing from the side, her red lace bra fit her perfectly. I pulled out of my driveway as she directed me to her house. Megan was a brunette with hair that curled just below her shoulders. Her amazing brown/green eyes seemed to sparkle and she had the most beautiful smile I had ever seen. She looked as if she were at least five years younger than my mother, who was 36. We chatted about the neighborhood, our interests, she asked me about my senior year in high school and about colleges I was looking at. With a grin she said “ Well I bet your girlfriend’s happy to have you.” I laughed and responded “ Thank you, but I actually don’t have a girlfriend.” She acted surprised and asked if I was serious. I said I was, I felt good about her complements. I turned down her long and rocky driveway, the car bounced as it traveled towards Megan’s house. I glimpsed over at her chest and watched her boobs bounce all around. I looked up at her face, she was looking forward but she had a wide grin on her face; I decided to concentrate on driving instead. I stopped at her house and said “ alright, here you go” we made eye contact, she thanked me and continued to look at me with a smile. I expected her to get out of the car immediately and the brief moment of silence caught me off guard. She leaned across the car and kissed me. I pulled away at first because I was so startled but she pulled me back and whispered in my ear, “I see you’ve been enjoying bra.” she kissed me again and we made out for a few more seconds. After this, she leaned back and took off her wet shirt and unhooked her bra. As soon Megan finished un-hitching her bra she covered her breasts with her hands. She finally removed her hands and reveled her soft white breasts. They were larger than I expected them to be and my hands went to them immediately; they were warm and soft. She let out a loud moan as I fondled her nipples, which were slightly larger than quarters. She kissed me again, her soft, full lips pressed against mine and the feeling was unquestionably gratifying. When our kiss ended she opened her door and rounded the car to my side. Her naked chest became wet in the rain and was fully visible as she passed by the headlights. She opened my door and dropped to her knees. I turned to face her and put my legs outside of the door. Megan quickly unzipped my pants and removed my already erect dick. Skillfully she began to rub, suck, and caress my penis. She used her lips, her tongue, and her hands to play with my dick. Her lips slid over my dick and her tongue rounded it as her head bobbed up and down.. She took my dick and placed it between her boobs, she squeezed them together from both sides and rubbed them all over. I couldn’t hold back anymore, I moaned as I was about to reach orgasm. Just as I began to cum she took the head of my penis into her mouth and sucked as hard as she could; I could see her cheeks contracting as she drew the semen into her mouth and swallowed. I passed her the shirt and bra from the seat beside me, she kissed me on the cheek and said “See ya later babe.” As she walked into her house, topless, I lay back, surprised and still paralyzed with pleasure. Overjoyed with how my night went, I pulled the car out of Megan’s road and went home happily.

anonymous readerReport

2012-06-26 14:17:30
I keep losing track because loss of paragraphs.

Anonymous readerReport

2009-07-20 10:41:18
I like it very much. Short though, so typing with one hand...

Anonymous readerReport

2008-11-29 07:22:01
Was well done and i was probly too into the story to notice any errors of sorts. Agreed use paragraphs cause like this its rough on the eyes, and you gotta squint so you lose the mood. Also Make a 2nd one that has a sex scene cause it sounds good, gots rythme and what not, good luck.

Anonymous readerReport

2008-11-27 02:12:19
use paragraphs, and have a sex scene

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