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Something I wrote in less than 5 minutes. Its not supposed to rhyme
I remember every little detail about us.
How we first met and I knew we would be together
How at orientation you stayed with me while I was sick.
How nervous we were to tell each other our feelings.
And I remember all our firsts.
The first time we held hands at Harry Potter,
And again in the car when you brother was being annoying.
The first time we napped after VBS,
And how happy you looked as you slept with your head on my chest.
The first time we kissed in the parking garage,
And how I felt like I was walking on air after.
I remember cuddling in the living room at school,
And waking up early just to see you.
I remember walking you back to the train station,
And how lonely that walk was back without you.
I remember the late nights talking to you,
And the even later nights helping you clean up at work.
I remember you coming to school early so we could nap,
And me missing so many English classes just to nap longer.
I remember sleeping on my couch with you next to me,
And never thinking that happiness would end
I remember trying to be everything you deserved,
And even though I failed you stuck with me.
I remember the broken promises, hearts, and dreams
And I still can’t forget about you.
But what I remember the most
You are my first true love, and no one can tell me otherwise.

Anonymous readerReport

2015-06-19 02:34:16
I Loved you more then anything and still you did me bad.we could of been happy and had a life together.all you did was lie to me.I hope your happy because nobody won.I 'll never understand why you did everything to me.miss the girls and your family.all I wanted was a women to love me.I must say it's hard to find a good man.I never met anybody in my life to be so scanless.not blaming you for's my fault for believing in people who want the cycle to end and trusting them saying your the best thing to come in there life.May you have a long life with your man.I believe you picked the right person.please don't say you loved me.that was never lost your best friend you'll ever have.over time you'll ask yourself God why did I fuck him over.

anonymous readerReport

2012-11-22 12:28:33
You've hit the ball out the park! Inrcdeible!

anonymous readerReport

2011-08-30 07:03:55
That was absoultly beautiful

anonymous readerReport

2011-07-24 04:50:18
Very well written, for a first draft. Love the emotion :)

Earl JohnReport

2009-02-07 19:16:03
Very touching.
Leaves a lot of detail to the imagination (That's GOOD, Very GOOD)
For example: Is the subject person younger (daughter? girlfriend's daughter? student? etc), approximately the same age (girlfriend? etc), or older (mother? mother's friend? teacher? etc.)? The reader gets to choose and so this will mean many different things to different people!

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