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Simpsons Shower Revised
Homer turned on the water then waited a moment for the water to warm up. Then he stepped into the shower sighing as it flowed down his back. There was nothing like a nice hot shower after a long days work at the power plant to help him relax. Especially since he had to go to his wifes sisters house that night.
Not that he had anything against his wife’s sisters Selma and patty yeah not much it’s just that he hated the way the two of them treated him and he could think of a lot of things he’d rather do with his time like watch the football on the tv. But they’d already agreed to have dinner with marge’s sisters and she’d be extremely upset if he asked her to cancel.
‘Oh well’ homer thought now theirs a thought homer thinking ‘I guess it won’t kill me’.
There was a knock on the door then it was opened by his wife. “Homer can lisa shower with you"? "That way we’ll be ready to go a little sooner since you like to take such long showers!” homer laughed. Marge was always teasing him about taking really long showers. “Sure marge send her in".
Homer’s daughter lisa entered the bathroom closing the door behind her. “Hi homer” she said with a smile as she started to take of her red dress and white cotton panties. “Hi lisa how was your day today?” “Pretty good. How about you homer?”
Lisa opened the glass siding shower door and stepped into the shower. Homer moved slightly to one side so that she could get under the water next to him. “Not too bad.” At that point they washed off in silence.
Homer looked down at his daughter. She looked back up at him smiling brightly. It struck homer just how pretty his daughter was she reminded him so much of her mother. The same long hair the same beautiful brown eyes and the same sexy smile. Homer shook himself. He couldn’t believe he’d just put the word ‘sexy’ into a description of his daughter. She was pretty yes but she was much too young to ever be thought of as sexy.
But even as he thought this his eyes drifted lower glancing over the smooth skin of her flat chest. From the waist up she could be a little boy he told himself. Then his eyes went lower to the smooth little pussy that proved she was very much a girl. Then lisa turned and he could see her tight smooth round little ass. Almost against homer's will his prick started to stiffen ever so slightly. He tried to will it limp but the harder he tried the stiffer it seemed to get.
Then lisa turned back around. “Homer what happened to your thing? It’s gotten bigger and it’s sticking up.” “It’s nothing lisa Just ignore it.” “Can I touch it homer?” Without waiting for a response from her father lisa placed one of her little hands on his cock. Homer breathed in sharply a sudden electric thrill going through his entire body as he felt his young daughter’s hand on his cock. There was no stopping it now. His cock sprang to erectness standing out stiff and hard from his belly.
Lisa quickly released her hand. “homer what happened? It got so big and hard when I touched it!!” At first homer didn’t know what to say. Then the words just seemed to come out of his mouth. “Lisa honey a man’s penis that’s what it’s called is normally small and limp like when you first got in the shower. But when he gets excited it gets stiff and hard like it is now.” “So you got excited when I put my hand on it?” “That’s right lisa.”
Lisa put her hand back on it. Homer groaned gritting his teeth. God it felt good! “I can’t even get my hand all the way around it!” “Why don’t you use both hands then?” “Okay!” homer couldn’t believe what he had just said. Lisa put her other hand around his cock squeezing it between her two hands. Homer looked down at lisa and she looked up at him a huge smile on her face. ‘God’ homer thought ‘ she has the sexiest smile.’ More than anything else lisa smile reminded him of marge. Homer had always loved marge's smile.
Homer’s cock twitched slightly as lisa held it. “Oooh homer I felt it move.” “That’s because it likes your hands on it lisa” homer told her. He couldn’t believe what he was saying! His next words shocked him even more. “Lisa if you move your hands up and down on it it’ll feel even better.” Lisa immediately started moving her hands up and down on her father’s dick. Homer knew that what he was doing was terribly wrong but he’d never been so aroused in his life as he was at this moment. Watching his lisa stroke his cock made him incredibly horny.
He looked down at her loving smile his attention on her full lips. He could picture them wrapped around his dick. He knew he’d feel extremely guilty when this was all over but for now his only thoughts were on his daughter lisa and the enjoyment she was bringing him and more importantly the enjoyment she could bring him.
“Do you like Daddy’s penis lisa?” “Uh huh. This is fun homer.” Homer swallowed hard then took a deep breath building up his nerve. “If you really like it lisa why don’t you give it a kiss?” Lisa looked up in surprise. “You mean kiss your thing your penis?” “That’s right lisa. It’s not going to bite.” Lisa and homer laughed.
Then lisa leaned down and placed a quick kiss on the tip of homer’s penis. “How was that?” “That felt really good lisa. Did you like doing it?” “Kinda. Can I do it again?” “Sure lisa. Kiss it all you want. Kiss all over it.” Lisa smiled brightly and moved her head down to homer’s dick she kissed his head again then his shaft. Then she started kissing his dick all over enjoying herself immensely. Her hands continued to slide slowly up and down homer's long shaft. “Why don’t you lick it too lisa?” “Lick it? You mean like a lollipop?” “That’s right lisa just like a lollipop.”
Lisa stuck her tongue out touching homer's cock with just the tip. Finding that it didn’t taste bad lisa ran her tongue along homer's shaft. Homer groaned his breathing coming in deep ragged gasps. Then lisa surprised him. Treating his cock just like a lollipop she slipped the head into her mouth and sucked on it. “Oh God lisa that feels soooo good. Suck Daddy’s cock lisa. Suck it into your mouth. That’s it baby. Use your tongue too. Yeah that’s it. Oh lisa you’re making Daddy feel so good . . .” Homer was amazed. His lisa was a natural cocksucker.
She sucked him as deeply into her mouth as she could running her tongue along the underside as she sucked him. She could only get about half of his 8 inches into her mouth so she stroked the rest with her hands. Homer could feel the sperm building up in his balls. He couldn’t take much more of this. “God that’s great lisa. But you’d better stop now.” “Why’s that homer?” Lisa asked removing her mouth from homer's cock. “Well lisa when a man feels really really good like you’re making me feel right now he shoots some white stuff out of his cock it’s called cum.” “Your cock? Is that another word for penis?” “That’s right lisa” Homer said with a smile. “Just keep stroking me lisa that way you can see my cum. I didn’t want to squirt it in your mouth and surprise you.” “Okay homer” lisa said stroking his cock.
Then she surprised her father again. “What does cum taste like homer?” Homer was shocked at the question. However he also found it very arousing. “I don’t know honey but your mother likes it.” “Marge sucks your cock??” “Yes lisa. This is something Mommy and Daddy do to show that they love each other.” “Can I taste your cum homer?” Homer groaned. God his little girl turned him on. “I’ll tell you what honey. When I’m ready to shoot my cum I’ll tell you and you can open your mouth and taste it.” “Okay!” lisa stroked homer’s cock even faster.
He was close he was very close. “Oh God lisa here it comes!! Daddy’s cumming lisa. Oh OH!!” lisa’s eyes widened as the first spurt of cum shot out of homer’s cock landing on her cheek. She quickly opened her mouth and moved closer to the tip of his penis sticking out her tongue. The second and third spurts landed right on her tongue.
Lisa held her mouth open waiting until her father’s cock shot the last of it’s load then she closed her mouth swallowing his cum. Her hands kept stroking his cock as it jerked and twitched. Then she slid it into her mouth sucking the last few drops of cum from his dick. She held it in her mouth as it slowly grew limp then let is slide out. “That was fun homer!! I kinda like how your cum tasted too!” “I’m glad you liked it lisa. You made Daddy feel really good.
Do you want me to make you feel good too?” “Uh huh!” homer smiled. He looked down at his daughter at her smooth sexy pussy. “Okay lisa I want you to lean back against the wall and spread your legs.” Lisa did as she was told. Homer crouched down on his knees in front of her. He ran his hands along her smooth chest and stomach then slid them around to her ass. Homer squeezed her small firm ass cheeks in his hands then bent down and kissed his daughter’s pussy mound. Lisa giggled. “That tickles homer!!” “Do you like it lisa?” “Yeah! Keep doing it homer.”
Homer returned his attention to her pussy. He lightly kissed all over her pussy then slid his tongue out and ran it along her slit. Lisa’s giggles quickly turned to moans and sighs as her father pushed his tongue into her slit sucking lightly on her little clit at the same time. He held her ass tightly to keep her from wiggling too much.
Then he put one of her legs on his shoulder spreading her pussy lips apart with his fingers. He pushed his tongue deep into her young virgin twat lightly rubbing her clit with his finger. “Oh homer that feels really good!” Then homer pushed a single finger up into her pussy eliciting a long low moan from his daughter. He worked his finger slowly in and out stretching out her tight pussy. He was careful not to push too hard he didn’t want to take a chance at hurting her.
He was just about to put in a second finger when there was a knock at the door. “Would you two hurry up?” marge said through the door. Homer immediately pulled his finger out of lisa’s pussy trying to put her leg down and stand up as fast as possible. Thank God marge didn’t decide to open the door and look in on them!! “I guess we’ll have to continue this some other time lisa.
We’d better get out and get ready for your aunts.” “Okay homer. That was fun! Can we do it again?” “We’ll see lisa But I want you to promise me you won’t tell anybody. A lot of people think what we just did should only be done between adults and Daddy could get into a lot of trouble if anyone found out. So nobody can know okay lisa?” “Not even Mommy?” “Not even Mommy. It’ll be our little secret okay lisa?” lisa smiled. “Okay homer. Our little secret!!” With that homer and lisa got out of the shower dried off and went to their respective bedrooms to get ready to go out.
Marge gave homer a dirty look when he entered their bedroom. “I’m glad I had lisa join you or we’d never get out of here!” “I’m glad you did too dear” homer said with a smile. Of course he had an entirely different reason for saying so. As wrong as he knew it to be he very much wanted to spend more intimate moments with his young daughter. The thought brought a smile to his face as he got dressed.