This is a story I posted a little while ago. It didn't do to well so I went back and re-read it and realised that it did indeed suck. So I decided to go back and revise it, hopefully people will like this one better. I'm also going to do a revised edition of "My Neighbor" which was the first story I ever wrote.
This began at my friends Halloween party this year (2009). Costumes were mandatory and because I didn’t have a job at the time I couldn’t go out and buy a new costume, so I had to improvise with what I had at home. Since I am a heavy set guy with long hair and a totally bitchin goatee I just put on my red gym shorts, a plain blue shirt, a pair of flip flops, tied my hair back and went as the comic book store guy from The Simpsons. Of course there was liquor at the party; I didn’t drink much because I knew I had to drive home. After my two shots of Jeagermister I started to mingle with other people there. Some people I see every day at my community college, some I have never seen before in my life, and some people I hadn’t seen since I graduated high school in ’08. One of these people was Amy.
I was incredibly surprised to see here there. The surprise was from two reasons 1) I didn’t know that she knew Shawn well enough to be invited to his Halloween party; 2) I thought she was going to school at NAU in Flagstaff. I decided it really didn’t matter why she was there, as long as she was I figured I’d go and say hello.
She came to the party dressed as an angel; her costume was made from a white furry corset that barley held in her D cup breasts and had a matching short skirt, white thigh high stockings that ran all the way down her long sexy legs to a pair of white leather boots, and a pair of wings attached to the back, they were also white. Now looking back at it it’s a little ironic that she was wearing all white, the color of purity, and it wasn’t very long until she became anything but pure.
We talked a little, mostly about school, which was how I found out that she wasn’t going to NAU anymore because her financial aid fell through and now she was going to community college on the opposite side of town that I was. It was a little hard for me to talk to her because she was already very drunk, I think she was about to do shot number five by the time we started chatting, and because of just how fucking hot she looked in her costume. If we weren’t in my friends house, and if I was a little more drunk I would tear her little costume off and do her right then and there. I had to try really hard not to think about this because I was wearing gym shorts at the time and I didn’t want anything embarrassing to pop up. Randomly during our conversation she asked if I was sober enough to give her a ride back to her apartment, I was so I just told her to let me know when she was ready to go. She said she would then she went to go play some beer pong, her ass looked so perfect as she walked away from me and towards the beer pong table, I thought I may get a boner just watching her walk away.
I pulled my self together, regained my composure and went outside where some people were smoking hookah. I joined them, hookah was a good way to kick back and relax. The conversation when I joined was about Star Trek II: the Wrath of Kahn; I got into the character of comic book store guy and joined in. Yes I did make the joke of saying “Best Star Trek movie EVER!” About 20 minutes later Amy came running out of the house, dashed to the corner of the fence and started puking all over the place.
“Hey, Darren, are you still good to drive?” She asked trying to catch her breath.
“Yeah, you want to go now?” She obviously did, not many people want to continue partying after puking.
“Just let me finish throwing up.” She said.
After a few more heaves from her, and another hit of the watermelon flavored Hookah for me, we left the party. “You feelin’ any better” I asked as we pulled away from Shawn’s house.
“Yeah, much better, now that I got that out of my system. Thanks for the ride, I really appreciate it.” Her speech as a little less slurred than when I was talking to her before I could tell she was starting to sober up a little.
“Oh, don’t even mention it, it’s my pleasure.” It really was, I enjoyed hanging out with her and I would do just about anything to her, and I would do anything to her that she would want me to.
Her apartment complex was only a couple miles away. I found a spot next to her apartment and offered to walk her to the door, she then asked if I wanted to come inside and hang out a little before we called it a night. I figured ‘sure, it could be fun’ I had no idea how much fun Amy and I would be having together that night.
Once we were inside the apartment she went to the bathroom to ‘freshen up’ which I guess meant brushing her teeth because I heard her electric toothbrush from the living room where I waited for her on the couch. She came out a couple of minutes later the wings of her costume had already come off. “Should I put some music on?” she asked with a sweet smile. I nodded approval. She kept all her CDs on the bottom shelf of her entertainment center, it probably wasn’t necessary for her to get on her hands and knees to look for a CD, she could have just bent over, but I didn’t mind at all as I mentioned earlier she had a terrific ass. I also noticed as she was on her hands and knees her skirt had gone up and I could clearly see she wasn’t wearing any panties. I could clearly see her ass and pussy in all their glory. I wondered to myself ‘should I look away, does she want me to see this, or what, she isn’t even trying to hide anything, maybe she just doesn’t notice that I can see every thing.’
She picked a CD then turned to me and said “What do you think about… Oh, my, enjoying the view are we?” She pointed at my noticeable boner that I got without even noticing just from watching her pick out the CD. At first I panicked a little, I thought she might be disgusted and make me leave, I picked my words carefully. “Why yes I was.” I said slyly, I will admit I could have said something better to make the situation less awkward, but I was aroused out of my mind and that was the best I could come up with.
At this she just smiled, tossed the CD to the ground and walked toward me. She sat on the couch next to me, put her hand on my thigh and started to kiss me, it was a good thing she brushed her teeth because her breath was still minty as opposed to vomity. At first I wanted to pull away because she has been a good friend of mine for years, but also I can’t deny that I’ve wanted to do this since the day I met her. I don’t know how long we shared this passionate kiss but as we kissed her hand moved closer and closer to my throbbing cock. Eventually she just got on top of me and started to jack me off through my shorts. She pulled away from our kiss smiled at me and asked “Do you like that?”
“Mm, hmm” was all I could say, even though it was still through the pants it was the best hand job I had ever gotten.
“Good, let’s take our little friend out, okay?” I nodded. She reached into my pants and pulled out my raging 6inch boner and this made the hand job even better than it was before. “That’s better,” she said smiling at me, “tell me Darren, did I give you this boner?” I nodded I could hardly even think it was so good. At this time I felt like I could burst at any moment. “I’m gonna... gonna… oh fuck I’m gonna.” I came before I could get the word “cum” out of my mouth. Most of it just got on Amy’s hand which she liked off, some of it got on the skirt of her Halloween costume.
“Oh, you got cum on my skirt.” She said smiling “I guess it’ll have to come off.” She got off me, took a couple of steps back and gave me a little strip tease, taking off her corset slowly and sexually, then she removed the skirt. Now that I think of it maybe the skirt came off first, I can’t clearly remember because at the time all I could think was ‘oh my god I can’t believe this is happening, she is so beautiful, and I’ve wanted this for so long.’ Once the skirt and corset were off she just stood there, the nipples her large tits were already pretty hard, and her pussy was shaven. This of course got my cock hard again which I guess was the effect she wanted because when she saw it was hard she began to move back to me.
“Do you want to be inside me?” She whispered in my ear as she placed her self on top of me yet again with my erection just outside of her pussy lips.
“I’ve wanted to be inside you since the day we met” I whispered back, and it was true, I had really wanted to do this with her for a long time. She looked me in the eye, smiled and slid my hard throbbing boner into her moist pussy. God the inside of her pussy felt good, she began to thrust her pelvis; I moved my body in sync with hers. I could feel her begin to breathe harder and harder as she began to move toward her climax. “OH FUCK!” she screamed finally, “OH FUCK I’M GONNA CUM! I’M GONNA CUM!” Sure enough she did, I could feel her pussy juices flow all over my balls. As she came I could feel myself about to cum again.
“I’m gonna cum” I told her.
“Oh, fuck I want you to cum inside me, CUM INSIDE ME!” She screamed. She wanted it so I gave her a cream pie right then and there. She began to slow down as my hot load shot inside her she kissed me again. I knew right then that we would be hanging out a lot more often