Chapters 1-4
Just a little preface here, not everything I have marked here is in this first installment.... There is more please be patient while I hammer it out there are sections that are annotated by arrows which are flashbacks... keep that in mind. And let me know if you want the rest of the story. Thanks


An aircraft traveling over the open water, twelve passengers a Pilot a Co-pilot and the stewardess, Naomi the 28 year old stewardess, she’s a Mocha cream goddess of African decent standing 5’ 10” tall with a busty hourglass figure she has been working for a private airline for 8 years after finishing flight school she couldn’t get anyone to take her seriously because of her physical attributes. In the first row are Joe and Anabell and Sunni. The next row is Pricilla and rose, then Rachel and Gary then Nicole and Shannon and finally Jeremy Tiffany and Sara.

Joe is the Heir to a fortune his father owns a bank syndicate Joe is about 6’ tall well muscled wearing fashionable clothes name brand, Tennis star, racket ball going to Harvard for a buisiness degree. Blonde haired blue eyed. Graduated in the middle of his class but was known to have threatened several teachers and those he hadn’t he’d bribed or blackmailed upon his graduation. He at his father’s prodding had hired Anabell to do his dirty work for him. He had been dating Sunni for about six months , and in that time had cheaded on her at every opportunity . he loved nothing more than humiliating women and would do so whenever he could. The only reason he hadn’t with sunny was because it was much better to sponge off her than bump her. Annabel is his personal assistant stepping and fetching for whim whatever he likes or wants. Annabel a 23-year-old high school drop out she was lightly tanned with brown eyes and platinum hair. Standing 5’ 8” she was slim busty with a bubble butt. She was attractive her boyfriend had left her with a huge pile of debt and was jobless with no real skills, some taste. She had answered Joe’s add in the paper for 20K a year plus room and board it had sounded too good to be true, it was when she discovered joe’s dark side. But by then it was too lad and she had signed a 5-year contract and non-disclosure agreement.

Sunni is his would be girlfriend and the daughter of a Diamond trader. Sunni is dumb as a bag of hammers but sweet and tends to be a bit of an exhibitionist because she likes the attention. Blonde hair with brown eyes, Busty with a tight body 5’2” tall and really rather pretty with golden skin.
Pricilla and Rose are twins their father owns one of the major hotel chains. Pricilla the Charismatic of the two twins 5’ tall and athletic legs that go all the way up. She tends to dress in tight clothes and designer jeans, but also has affections for tube tops and skirts. Blonde hair and green eyes a little more imaginative though she tends to obsess on things especially animals. She got her Copper complexion probably from Indian heritage. Rose the mirror image of her sister tends to be the risk taker in flaunting the rules. Usually draping herself in designer clothes, but is better grounded than her sister, the two are very close.

Rachel and Gary both come from old money Brother and sister. Rachel 5’9” thick and busty with a big booty, her hair is straw blonde with brown eyes, and porcelain skin she enjoys nothing more than manipulating people. She dresses nicely but not too fashionable brand name but middle of the line stuff. She tends to dress provocatively short skirts and belly shirts, plunging necklines and half-cup bras, and thong under-wear. Gary stands about 5’10’ built like an offensive lineman, brown hair, and white as a bag of wonder bread, his face a little on the round side. His favorite things to do are terrorizing the neighborhood kids and playing video games and eat not nessicerliy in that order. He whines when he is at a disadvantage but typically takes whatever advantages he can get from anyone. Rachel and Gary had the same father but different mother’s their father had apparently impregnated two sisters a few days apart.

Nicole is Sunni’s best friend and has been since they started school together way back in kindergarten. Nicole 4’10” plays down her intelligence ugly as sin to look at but her body is very closely comparable to Sunni’s, and has often been a body double for sunny when her friend has gotten into compromising situations much to her own delight, her skin is sort of an orangish brown.

Shannon Tiffany and Sara are best friends and Jeremy is a friend of Sara’s family. Sara’s father had mentored Jeremy for many years and Sara’s family had paid his way for this end of school vacation. Jeremy’s father and Uncle had brought him up. Sara’s father was a tenured professor and Tiffany was the daughter of an advertising executive. Sara was pale skinned with a farmers tan 5’3” tall generously busty, spoiled snooty and overall not the nicest person. She always wore the nicest and lastest fashions sometimes working on new looks. She was cordial at least to Jeremy and that was only because Jeremy acknowledged her but ignored her for the most par. She found him quite infuriating. Sara also thought that Jeremy was very cute, though she would never admit it. Her fashion sense tended toward the conservative Highlighting but never revealing much of her bountiful figure. She had firey red hair and cool green eyes. Shannon is Sara’s best friend she has a lithe athletic body standing 5’3” with a generously curvy body. She tends to be over protective of her friend whom she secretly lusts after she usually follows Sara’s sense of style albeit a little less expensively. She has medium length blonde hair and an olive complexion with blue eyes. Tiffany is Shannon’s other good friend and is completely uninhibited when it comes to sex. And has relieved Shannon’s desires on more than one occasion outrageously flirtation but very self-conscious about her body or lack there of. She is very close to Sara who looked at her as comic relief. She stands 5’5” with alabaster skin and reddish brown hair.

Chapter I

Now ten of these eleven passengers were spoiled brats always insisting they get what they wanted. Which is why they were on a special graduation trip into the south Pacific. The only reason Jeremy was there was that Sara’s father Arthur has insisted and paid for him to go. Jeremy’s family certainly couldn’t afford it. Jeremy was only going to the Exclusive private school “The Conservatorium” because he got a scholarship and he had actually graduated 3rd in his class. Jeremy 6’2” brown hair with gray green eyes well toned and built, dresses very practically is very quiet about himself. He has a special relationship with both of Sara’s parents and Golden brown skin from being outside a lot.

The Plane reached a cruising altitude as it traveled west towards a stormy horizon. Soon the plane was buffeted by the strong winds. The Captain announced that every one buckle up because it was going to get rough. The craft was rocked by a downdraft 12000 feet as hail hammered the fuselage. Lighting lit the sky as another microburst dropped the plane to 9000 feet. The crew fought at the controls. A bolt of lighting exploded through the craft, which was quickly followed by a second and a third. The light blinded the crew and the plane lurched again 5000 feet. Winds whipped at the craft sending it further and further off course. The captain fighting the wind, tried to bring the nose up. The Master alarm wailed as the plane stalled. He gave it more power the plane plummeted out of the sky. The engines screamed against the wind as the nose dipped below the horizon, 3000 feet 2000 feet 1000 feet the co-pilot called out a distress on the radio “Mayday Mayday Mayday, The world exploded the port wing sheared off as the plane tumbled the pilot did his best to right the plane with the remaining control surfaces. The plane twisted against him 80 feet he brought the nose up and it fell again 50 feet he struggled, the nose hit the water breaking the cockpit off from the passenger compartment, the remainder of the plane skipped across the surface of the water at 200 miles per hour jolting against the water once twice three times and then slowly gliding to a stop with a sucking noise. The lights were out inside the passenger cabin and the craft rolled on its axis. Jeremy shook himself he moved as quickly as he could to the emergency locker
Two inflatable rafts and some rope he picked up the rafts and ran to the front of the plane, it was sinking quickly. He inflated the first raft and after tying it off to his waist, everyone was unconscious so he loaded Joe, Anabell, the stewardess, Sunni, Pricilla and Rose. He then loaded the rest into the second raft and paddled away from the doomed aircraft.

The morning dawned brought and clear and only a few miles away was an island, Jeremy Paddled toward it did not take long for the current to pull the two rafts onto the barrier reef. The reef capsized both rafts the beach only 40 yards away many of the survivors deposited by the tide on the beach. Jeremy rushed to pull the rest of them up on shore. He pulled them up on dry sand everyone was still breathing, and he could be happy about that, the stewardess who’s nametag read Naomi had a bump on her head.


Sunni had been happy a the day before Joe had unknowingly fucked Nicole to his heart’s content and hadn’t said anything nasty to her afterwards about anything. Of course Nicole and she had had a nice little 69 later after Joe had fallen asleep to celebrate. There had been occasions when she had had to put out really and Joe had bitched about why she couldn’t always get it right. That was of course because Nicole had been doing the putting out, but she had always said that it was because she wasn’t comfortable.
Later that day the two of them had gone to the mall and she bought Nicole some new clothes as a thank you, the sales girl who’s name she couldn’t remember had been very nice and had spent a lot of extra time in the dressing room with Nicole. The girl even offered to use her discount on the clothes. But strange things happened when she was with her BFF. Later some boys were harassing her and Nicole went and talked to them. There were four of them and well they were at the park and Nicole walked away with them and then disappeared she came back with a big smile or her face it was funny how Nicole was always happy when she was around her but who knew.

The night before the flight they had spent the night together Sunni had put some special clothes in Nicole’s bag so that she would look extra nice on their vacation. A few thongs and some bikini tops that would make the boys drool. Sunni loved to make boys drool, it worked on everyone except Jeremy. Gary had almost pushed her in a corner once at a house party but again Nicole had saved her Gary ended up going into a dark bedroom later with someone who she didn’t know but she had had the hardest time finding Nicole.

She often wondered why Jeremy didn’t drool for her he was always busy with schoolwork. He even tutored her the last few years she always wore her most revealing outfits for him too short skirts and tank tops with no bra but he never gave her a second look even when she tried to give him a look. It wasn’t like she was cheating she just wanted to know that she was desirable and well Jeremy apparently didn’t desire her. Maybe he liked boys she decided or at least that is what she hoped because she couldn’t bear to think that she wasn’t the hottest thing in school. Oh sure there were other hot girls, Sara for one but she never said a word to any boy ever. Rose and Pricilla were hot too but one of them she could never tell which would always flirt but they never had a real boyfriend at least not that she noticed. Shannon was cute too not super hot or anything but she was always with Sara, and Tiffany, Tiffany on the other had would date boys not a lot but sometime she would go out. Sunni didn’t understand wasn’t it supposed to be a girl’s job to drive boys crazy and then well not everyone had a friend like Nicole she guessed, maybe that was the problem.

Sunni had only given Joe a blowjob or two in her time with him having never had sex she was a little afraid of what a big dick like Joe’s would do to her. At least it looked big to her though; Nicole said it was barely sufficient. She was beautiful and she knew it maybe she would someday pay to get Nicole’s face fixed plastic surgery could do wonders even for dogs like her maybe that was why she kept her around she wondered.


Sunni opened her eyes and coughed “where are we” she asked looking at Jeremy.

“Not sure” Jeremy said “but I don’t think its Australia or even Borneo”

“Why Australia is an Island right with a beach and hotels and everything”

“Yes it is” Jeremy said patiently “we can talk about where we are later right now lets move everyone to those trees over there”

“Uh no poor boy you move them I have to go to the bathroom, do you know where it is”

“I haven’t found them yet” Jeremy said shaking his head and trying not to laugh “Wait here I’ll go look after I’m done with moving everyone to the shade” it took a good half hour to finish and Sunni by that time was doing what can only be described as the pee-pee dance. Jeremy looked around there was a mangrove swamp in the middle of the island and a cliff on the west side and only a few trees to the east. “Sunni over there in those trees is as good a place as I can think of”

“There is no Toilet over there!” She screamed, “How am I supposed to pee with no toilet?”

“Sunni,” Jeremy said patiently “There are probably no toilets for one thousand miles Just go over to those trees squat down and pee”
“I can’t,” She cried

“Why not?”

“Not in these shoes” Jeremy saw her point she could barely stand in the loose sand in 5 inch stilettos he shook his head “Could you help me take them off I think if I bend down you know… Please?” Jeremy looked at Sunny she was wearing a simple cotton blouse and a micro mini skirt. He knelt down at her feet “Just please don’t look up” He unfastened the first shoe and as quickly as she could she kicked it off he started on the second “Oh god oh god oh god” Sunni cried as a stream of yellow liquid started down one leg and then the other he finished with the second shoe and she kicked it off and ran down the beach to the trees. Jeremy decided that most of the women could probably do without their impractical shoes. He took them all and put them in a pile. Sunni returned a few minutes after he finished. “Um Jeremy what should I do my clothes smell like piss and no one is here to wash them for me?”

“Uh why don’t you go and rinse them off in the ocean,” Sunni headed down toward the water “Sunni don’t go in too deep there might be urchins or stone fish out there”


“Sharks there might be sharks out there”

“Oh um I should probably take this off, promise you won’t be naughty and look?”

“Sure I promise” Jeremy didn’t really care, right now he was exhausted, but he still had things to take care off he checked everyone. It appeared that Gary had a broken arm, he would deal with that later what concerned him was the goose egg on the head of the flight attendant.

“You didn’t peek did you?” Sunni asked as she returned


“Not even a little?”

“No I was busy” Sunni pouted a little she seemed disappointed, Jeremy shrugged and looked at Sunni “Wait here I’ll be back in a little bit” He walked over to the mangrove and found a few limbs that he could break off he went back to Gary he peeled off his shirt and looked at Sunni and shook his head

Chapter II

Someone moaned “Oooh I think Rachael is waking up that’s good right” Sunni asked.

“Yes” Jeremy said tying the four green braches to Gary’s elbow he ripped two more strips from the bottom of his T-shirt. “Sunni can you tie these to Gary’s arm right here at the wrist”

“Uh yeah I’m not stupid you know”

“Rather than arguing Jeremy said “good real tight when I tell you okay?”

“Okay!” Jeremy put his foot against Gary’s upper arm and grabbed his wrist and pulled Gary screamed and there was a pop as the bone slipped into place

“Tie now Sunni” he said looking at the girl who looked like a deer caught in the headlight of an oncoming train. “Sunni now” he yelled that broke her out enough that she tied the two strips of cotton onto the splint.
“You didn’t just kill him did you?” Sunni asked alarmed

“No he had a broken arm, I set it trust me it was better this way.” He put his shirt back on

“Is everything okay I heard a scream” Rachel asked hurrying over.

“So did I” said Sara who sat up a few yards away “Where are we”

“Its an Island, but its not Australia thought at least that’s what Jeremy says” Sunni supplied

“What Island it is I have no idea” Jeremy said, “Look you girls stay here it looks like everyone is waking up and I need to look around some more”

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Sara remembered the week before she left quite vividly. She had come home early one day and heard voices in her parents’ bedroom. It was too early for her dad to get home so when she called out. Her mother answered and quickly exited her room, Sara asked who was there with her, and she said that Jeremy was fixing a leaking pipe in their bathroom. Jeremy came out a few minutes later something was odd she just couldn’t put her finger on it. Jeremy of course went home shortly after that her mother handing him some money for the work that he did. She was a little worried about her mom she had been sick a lot lately in the morning she usually got better by the evening. She called Shannon to talk it was a pretty good conversation even if not much was said. Shannon kept on about how good she had looked that day in Volleyball and wanted to know if they were going to go to the mall or the movies or something that night. It was decided that the movies would be best and she picked up Shannon and Tiffany at Shannon’s house.

After the movie they went and ate burgers and continued back to Shannon’s house. Sara called her mom and told her that the three of them would be staying there that night. Shannon’s parents were hardly ever around and it wasn’t unusual for her to sneak some of the box wine from the fridge. This night was no exception she had a small refrigerator in her bedroom that she had stocked with a box before she left and the girls drank wine and talked until Tiffany suggest that they play a game.

Sara asked what game should we play and Tiffany suggested truth or dare? Sara remembered asking if they were twelve again in middle school. Tiffany then said okay how about this then we play truth or dare but we can’t leave the room. Again Sara admonished her friend. We could always take pics of our dares for posterity Shannon suggested holding up a camera. Oh hell no. Sara remembered saying but somehow they talked her into it. She had started with truths mostly was there anyone she liked, yes. Had she ever thought of doing it with a girl, no. Then the dare’s came pictures of her and tiffany half clothed, her and Shannon half clothed. She must have blacked out at some point it was pretty fun. In the morning while they were nursing their mutual hangovers she asked Shannon about the pictures. Shannon had replied that the camera hadn’t worked for some time the flash worked so it looked like it but it was all for show for Tiffany really and to add some risky excitement to the game.

She arrived home that after noon to find Jeremy working in the yard and her mother in bed under the covers. She inquired if she was all right she said that she was fine just a bit of something and it would soon pass. She watched Jeremy working in the yard through her window for a while he wasn’t wearing a shirt and his tight shorts made him look oh so good she thought she sat down in a chair away from the window and watched him through the blinds her hands lightly touching herself where she wanted him to touch her. She didn’t know why there really wasn’t anything special about Jeremy his Dad was weird and his Uncle was even weirder with his all night parties some nights and it was those nights that she didn’t see Jeremy. She slipped her hand inside her shirt and caressed her breast as she watched his strong muscled back work in the sun the sweat beading on his skin. She gasped and stopped herself it wasn’t the first time that she had fantasized about him but it was just too much he never really said much more than was cordial. Why wouldn’t he talk to her tell her how he felt something so there could be a connection so he could touch her kiss her. She turned and laid on her bed to call Shannon she didn’t answer she shrugged and wrote a bit in her diary then went through her clothes finally her eyes fell on a dog eared magazine at the back of her closet. She had had that for years it was a penthouse and it showed everything she liked that of course when she was younger and sillier she believed she would fantasize about herself and various boys and then it was she and Jeremy it was maddening. She finally got up and went to the kitchen where her mother was cooking dinner she got herself a glass of milk and after some chatting with her mom she returned to her room.

Her dad came home a few hours later he was late and he explained that he went by Jeremy’s house to ask his father if it was okay if he go on the trip with all the other rich kids from school. He said that Jeremy’s father had agreed and that Jeremy would be coming. Sara was both delighted a horrified, and she ate her dinner diligently trying to make it sound that she was very happy about it. Did Jeremy like her the thought that he might not tortured her, that he would never touch her in a special way.
The next day she had asked Jeremy about it he seemed fairly unenthused about the whole deal it seemed like he was annoyed to go, and she wondered if it was because of something she did or because of her but it seemed to be annoyed at the other people who were coming which cheered her up a bit.

She packed her clothes and repacked and thought of things that Jeremy might like or tossed out what he might not like. She wondered if some Aussie girl would steal his heart, at that thought she said I’ll tear her eyes out if she does dammit she was angry there for a while but then she went back to packing and planning the time that she would spend with Jeremy. She wondered what Shannon and Tiffany would do while she was spending time with Jeremy hopefully not tagging along, god she would hate that Tiffany was so flirty and flamboyant would Jeremy prefer her Shannon didn’t seem all that interested in boys but there was a possibility that she too would steal him away from her. If only she wasn’t so damn awkward and inexperienced she thought. No Jeremy is all the experience I need she smiled at herself I’ll get him and he will be mine all mine.

She kept saying that to herself and smiling even as she boarded the plane that fateful day


Chapter III

Jeremy explored the Island first following the beach then up to the top of a volcanic pillar he could see the whole Island it was maybe a mile long and he figured and about half of that wide near the basalt pillars was a stand of cane and there looked like six or seven mangroves and some bread fruit trees as well. Palm trees dotted the island everywhere most likely coconuts which was good. At the base of the rocks was what looked like a cave or maybe a lava tube he fished in his belt pouch, his uncle believed in being prepared inside the pouch was a flashlight a few yards of nylon string and a small ceramic folding knife and a hat para military style with a soft wide brim. Jeremy crawled into the hole and turned on the light there were several pools of water as well as what appeared to be a spring. Near the upper end of the tunnel was an outcrop of very shiny black rock that he recognized as obsidian. He climbed back out of the hole and flowed the beach around the Island. It was only a few minutes when he turned a corner and saw a large black shape on the beach. It was moving if only slightly and Jeremy Cautiously approached. He saw that it was a large Black dog, a lab, he examined the dog briefly and gave it a few rescue breaths and it soon recovered. It stood and walked with him along to beach. He returned to the survivors all of them were now conscious except for Naomi the stewardess.

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Joe remembered back to a few days before he had made Sunni blow him in the movie theater, that was so much fun he had thought. And then when he’d flashed her tits at the guy behind them. The look on his face was priceless, never mind the blush that it had caused Sunni. He’d taken her home after that and had gotten home himself. He went out to practice tennis which was his norm his parents were never home and so he had Annabel out watching him. She had commented that he hadn’t done too badly.
“Not bad that was great,” he’d said

“Of course” she had responded

“Then you play a match with me every time you score I’ll take a year off your contract every time I score you have to take off a piece of clothing and keep it off for the rest of the day. She of course hadn’t scored a point and had to spend the rest of the day naked he invited a few of his tennis buddies over and made her serve them drinks and snacks the other boys ogled and stared at her and he had ordered her to give one friend a blowjob because she was making them all hard with her body like that. She reluctantly had complied when she was getting into it Joe had come around and stuck his cock in her ass.

It wasn’t the first time he’d done that too her he’d made her suck his cock for her interview. He loved the feel of his cock in a girl’s ass. And he would fuck a girl in the ass before he would plow her pussy, besides it was so much more fun when the girl wined about it.

After he blew his load in her ass he made her suck off his other two friends and they had all blown their load on her face and tits. When his friends congratulated him on having a good time and they left.
He made Annabel stay like that until the next morning. He had called Sunni that morning and while he was talking to her he had Annabel blow him. Later that evening because Sunni was busy he watched a movie and had Annabel watch it with him. He made popcorn for her and jacked off into her bowl of popcorn before bringing it from the kitchen to her. She ate it without comment. What bugged him was that Sunni was always with her friend Nicole the dog girl, she was so unappealing yeah she had a nice body and all but who would want to fuck that face without a bag, and Sunni was always trying to get her a date it never worked out of course what was with girls there was always a dog with the pretty one’s and she wouldn’t go away. Well after this trip he’d make her go away one way or another. Sunni was his girl and she would just have to stop being friends with doggy Nicole. If Nicole didn’t get the hint then he would show her humiliate her in ways he would enjoy immensely.

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“Look” Joe explained, “we are alive and I’m sure we will be rescued very soon. No doubt they noticed so we just sit here on the beach catch some rays and relax. I’m sure someone will come soon.”

It was still early morning and Jeremy walked up overhearing the end of Joe’s explanation of things “Look Joe, Everyone we should at least try and start making a shelter and gather supplies.”

“Oh my god its Norman!” Pricilla Screamed

“Norman where have you been?” Rose asked

“You found Norman” Pricilla exclaimed leaping up and hugging Jeremy Violently he was attacked on the other side by Rose and they kissed him squealing and then returned their attention to the dog

“Look poor boy you do what you want, I’m not wasting my time when we’ll be rescued in a few hours.” Joe said defiantly

“You think so Joe?” Jeremy asked

“Of course I’m sure they are out there looking for us right now, they will be here in a matter of hours” Joe responded

“I’m sure they are Joe the trouble is they don’t know where to look, sure they have a General idea but we are talking about a search area the size of Texas, but never mind I don’t know what I’m talking about. Did you totally miss the whole castaway movie? same scenario different characters”

“When did that movie come out” one of the girls asked

“Isn’t that the one where the boat sank?” Jeremy shook his head

“Who’s in it”?

“Was it that one where that guy from that show, you know, showed his butt?”

“Oh you know I met him”

“Brown hair, nice butt…”

“Yeah he was making out with my friend Joyce and we…”

“Look all of you do whatever it is that you do I’ll be down the beach if you want to talk to me” with that Jeremy moved away and walked toward the western end of the Island


Shannon remembered the days before this trip started, she and Tiffany had been over at her house. She had really wished that Sara were a little more interested in the same things that she was which was eating pussy and girls. But all she would talk about was Jeremy but she was too scared to make a move on him and Jeremy was if nothing else difficult to talk to. Maybe she could get them into a threesome one day she had thought though Jeremy didn’t seem to be the lease interested in sex or girls or well anything except work. Sara on the other hand really seemed to be interested in sex and boys and well that were about where it stopped. She and Tiffany had spent a night with her a sort of slumber party a few days before the trip was scheduled to leave. They had gotten drunk or at least Sara had and she and Tiffany had imbibed a little. Once Sara had gotten well lubricated they had played truth or dare and it had ended with Sara passing out with her mouth on her nipple and the three of them naked. She had dipped her tongue into Sara’s sweet honey pot while she was unconscious but it really wasn’t that interesting with her not responding. She wanted to hear Sara moan her name to have her want to eat her pussy too reciprocation. She had gotten a few very nice pictures of Sara naked. That she had looked at later when she masturbated and when Tiffany had eaten her out the following days. Tiffany was great even if she preferred cock to pussy she loved sex any kind and any kink.

It was the day before they left and she had caught up with Tiffany at the mall, she had just finished something nasty in the parking lot and they had sat in the food court. Over ice cream they talked about their upcoming vacation. Tiffany had reached under the table and scooped some cum from her pussy and dripped it on her ice cream. She had been annoyed by that and had taken her into the bathroom after that and made her eat her out in a stall. She loved tiffany because she was so submissive about things as long as she got some pleasure.


anonymous readerReport

2012-11-01 05:48:11
I like this story, it's good but my only critisim is the amout of characters! There are toooo many and its hard to remember! Other than that it's bloody brilliant!!!! :)

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2012-09-09 07:59:07
There's nothing like the rielef of finding what you're looking for.

anonymous readerReport

2012-05-05 08:30:53
well this story has great potential and i can see i a good story ahead but the bad grammer and awkward flow of the story makes it very hard to read. good story base and idea though bro!

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2012-02-11 19:37:12
zTjWt4 I read online (computer problems) positive feedback about your resource. Didnt even believe it, and now saw myself. It turned out that I was not fooled!...

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2012-02-01 21:53:33
give the guy a break! He is doinng the vest he can with the stress of tf the world now adays.

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