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Poor red head gets raped and then is transformed into something great
Okay this Is the offical story- again this is my first story go easy on me. I hope you guys/girls like it

Ichigo Fang

A late Friday afternoon swim practice is where this story begins. It was close to the end of the season and the Fenrir high school swim team was being pushed to the limit by their coaches to ensure they were ready for states. To ensure that the freshman would properly complete each drill and set, they were paired up with an upper classmen. In young Dante’s case he was paired up with Tommy, aka Titan- because he was gigantic in both senses of the word- and was told to keep up with him. The other members of the team thought that this was cruel and unusual punishment for poor Dante because the stats were so UN even. Dante was 14 going on 15, 4’9”, and under developed- meaning he had not gotten to the stage of puberty where his muscles were started to developed. While Tommy was 18, 6’10, and was on the football team when not doing swimming-so he was ripped- and he had done swimming all four years of high school. But the coaches didn’t care and sent them off to complete their training regimen. Dante tried his best to keep up with Tommy but he just couldn’t manage it. As Tommy sped along, knowing full well that Dante couldn’t keep up, he had begun to think to himself of what he knew of Dante. Dante was a 14 year old freshman with strawberry blonde hair, which turned red when in the summer months. He was about 4’9” tall and had a childish build, no real muscle definition yet. He had bright blue eyes, a cute button nose and his baby face was speckled with freckles- but only on his checks. Tommy did a flip turn and swam back to his starting position to complete his set; half way there he passes Dante. Tommy notices that Dante has very fair pale skin with sort of a pinks hue. In all truth Tommy had a little bi crush on the ginger freshman and was glad that the coaches had decided to pair them up- it gave him the chance to sneak peeks at the youngster’s body without others noticing. Tommy rested on the wall of the pool and wait for Dante to finish. As he was waiting he notices Rachel staring at him. He and Rachel had gone out a couple times and he really liked her but she would never let him fuck her, she feared he would split her in half- which angered Tommy so they weren’t speaking. But this feud or her fear did not stop Rachel from checking Tommy out. 6’10”, jet black hair, tan muscular body that could rival Taylor Lauthuer’s, and a horse hung dick- what more could a girl ask for- Tall, Dark, and hung like a horse- an award winning combination. Dante had finally finished his laps and was now breathing excessively to take in oxygen; he was exhausted and did not know how much more he could take. In his hurry to take a breather Dante accidentally brushed up against Tommy’s dick, which caused a stirring in his loins. In Tommy’s defense he hadn’t gotten any in…. well forever because most of the girls/guys he went out with feared his dick- so Tommy was a little sexually frustrated and this touch was just enough to push him over the edge, Tommy need to fuck. But Tommy didn’t want his dick to burst out his Speedo so he forced himself to calm down. Just then the coach said that practice was over for most but Dante and Tommy had failed since Dante did keep up with Titan, He charged them both with another set of 2000 yards swim and followed everyone else in the locker rooms.
“Sorry about this Titan I did try to keep up” said Dante in a baby boy voice-which made Tommy/Titan think that the boy’s balls hadn’t drop yet. Tommy was pissed because he had planned on dealing with his rage hard on (that he was barely keeping counseled) and was now delayed. But the puppy dog look and the innocent voice made Dante look even cuter. So Tommy forgave him.
“It’s alright, I guess” said Tommy a little harsher than he meant to, but he was trying to get his monster cock under control. So they began the set again, Tommy pushing Dante hard to swim faster while “concocking” a way to get Dante back for this undeserved punishment.
*Time passes*
Tommy and Dante enter the locker room to find it completely empty and the coach tapping his foot impatiently.
“Hurry up, I gotta going” he growled.
Dante ran off to the showers, trying to avoid the coach’s glare for making him late, and grabbed his towel while Tommy talked to the coach.
“I could always lock up for you coach” he said as he finally thought of away to get his rocks off. Without even thinking about it the coach threw him the keys. “You can give them back to me on Monday” he said as he ran out the door. Tommy smiled from ear to ear as he locked the doors leading out of the locker room. He grabbed his towel and made his way to the showers, with a huge tent in his makeshift towel kilt. Tommy found Dante near the far wall as he entered the shower room. It was somewhat dark but Tommy could still make out Dante’s cute butt from where he was standing. His plan was simple: fuck Dante by any means necessary. So with this in mind he walks over to where Dante is bathing and begins to shower next to him. Dante looks up horrified because he –like most guys who had not yet started puberty- did not want Tommy to see his undeveloped dick. Tommy notices this and said “Don’t worry it’ll grow just give it time, you might even be as big as me when you’re older.” Tommy held up his dick and smiled- for he caught Dante looking. Dante’s whole face went red and began to leave the showers- partially to hide his penis and partially because he was getting hard and it disturbed him (+) he did not want Tommy to think he was gay. He was almost out the shower room door when Tommy picked him up and basically hugged him close so that their bare flesh touched- which didn’t help either’s erections. “Put me down Titan this isn’t funny” Dante yelled and Tommy lowered him to the ground. However, just before Dante’s feet touch the ground his butt came into contact with Tommy’s semi erect dick which made Dante jump. He turned around and saw that Tommy was completely hard and now Dante completely understood why everyone called him “Titan”. Tommy’s dick was a foot long and about 8” thick, no wonder all the girls feared that thing going in them thought Dante as he tried to back away. “Where do you think you’re going?!, Fresh meat” Tommy said as he to a step towards Dante. Dante got frightened and took off running through the locker room, however Tommy calmly walk after him. Dante tried to run through the locker room door but hit it instead and slide down- it was locked and he was trapped in the locker room with a horny Titan. Dante suddenly felt an arm rap around his mid section and was lifted off the ground again. Tommy started to whistle as he carried Dante back into the showers. Dante was shaking violently in fear as Tommy laid him out on his back on the soaked tile floor of the showers. Dante cried out “Titan, what are you going to do?, I..I I don’t really, I..” he started to stutter because he feared what would happen if he call Titan gay but as Titan/Tommy began to pull down his Speedo shorts it slipped out. “Titan I’m not gay!!!!”
Tommy laughed out loud “neither am I, I’m bi, so what’s your point?” he said as he pulled Dante’s Speedo shorts completely off, leaving Dante’s most private parts exposed. Once the shorts were off Tommy got a good look at Dante’s package. His dick was a little on the small size- about 4.2” cut- but cute and it laid on top two hairless golf ball sized balls. After taking in the sight Tommy put his one hand on Dante’s abdominals (to hold him still) and began to suck on Dante’s dick. Dante squirmed with pleasure as he felt Don’s tongue run up and down his penis, taking his tongue and licking the underside of Dante’s head, he even lick Dante’s piss slit . It only took Dante two minutes of bj before he blew his load into Tommy’s mouth, which Tommy spit back out on to Dante’s chest (he did not like the taste of his or anybody’s cum-cum swallowing was one of the lines he would not cross). Dante was on cloud nine-it had been his first blow job and most powerful orgasm to date- and didn’t notice Tommy lubing his dick up with spit and shower water. It only came to his attention what was going on when Tommy got down on all fours and started licking his ass hole. “What are you doing?! I’m not gay Tommy!!” Dante yelled. Tommy said nothing- hormones were driving him now- as he positioned the head of his dick at the opening to Dante’s ass. Dante kept squirming to get free but was held in place by the giant jock with the massive cock. Before Dante could protest more, Tommy shoved his dick in. This act was followed by a shriek of pain from Dante, who cried even more as Tommy kept on pushing his dick in. “Relax, it’ll hurt worse if you don’t relax” Tommy managed to say as he continued inch by inch to stick his dick in. Dante tried and through the sobs, managed to relax enough that the penetration didn’t hurt as bad. Dante’s hole was extremely tight, almost to the point of hurting Tommy but he gritted his teeth-he needed this he need to get off and what better way than to screw a crush. Tommy got about 9 inches inside Dante before he decided to actually fuck him, going in and out, in and out faster and faster as the great sensations he was feeling increased. Grudgingly Dante was somewhat enjoying being fuck because as Tommy’s dick rubbed up against the inner walls of his ass a certain spot was granting him great pleasure. After about 5 minutes Dante began to violently shake and wraith underneath Tommy-orgasm Tommy thought-as to confirm Tommy’s thought, Dante cummed all over himself and Tommy as his dick flopped around from the force of Tommy’s fuck power. Tommy thought this was so hot that he got too excited and could feel his cum building up, so he pulled out of Dante- who was relieved because it felt like he had taken a huge shit and now felt lighter- and then Tommy rammed it back in all the way, which made Dante scream with pain (it was like the jumbo shit went straight back up his ass). Tommy then unloaded his balls’ complete contents into Dante’s ass but it did not back flow, instead it kept going right up Dante’s intestines and into his stomach. Dante- to say the least felt weird and in pain- he began to cry as Tommy pulled out. Tommy, feeling somewhat responsible-for he did not mean to hurt the kid, cradled his redheaded freshman in his arms, and petted his head. Through his sobs Dante asked “why, why would you rape me what have I ever done to you.” Tommy’s answer was “Because when I was younger I was just like you until this guy at the local gym I go to raped me and told me it was a gift and bit me on the shoulder, you just remind me of me. The other reasons I was horny and thought you were hot”. Dante sobbed even more at the reasons he was violated and the fact that his ass was now had blood dripping out of it- but still no cum. Tommy just sat there patting and rocking Dante as he stroked Dante’s little dick. When Dante had settled down a little, Tommy held him close and whispered “this is a gift” he opened his mouth and bit Dante on his shoulder, hard. The bit was deep and drew blood but the weird heat sensation Dante received from it was scaring him the most. He started to feel siring pain spread all over his body and then blacked out, in Tommy’s arms. Tommy carried Dante out into the locker-room, dressed both of them then carried Dante to his pickup truck and drove him home. Tommy did not want Dante’s parents to see him like this so, Tommy scaled the side of Dante’s two story house and climbed into Dante’s room window – he knew where it was because he lived three houses down from Dante and had watch him grow up. Thinking to himself as he laid the redhead on his bed, “maybe that’s why I granted him the gift?”, but he couldn’t dwell on that now, he had things to do. Dante would need to be guided though his new puberty stages and his new abilities, so he would need a mentor. Tommy would have to figure out a way to spend more time with Dante. But he’d figure that all out later because now he was horny again and he need to get off, “maybe Rachel would let him stick it in her ass and then her pussy this time” he thought as he jumped out of Dante’s window and strolled back to the street for his truck.
*back in Dante’s room*
Dante was thrashing around in his bed, his body felt like it was engulfed in lava. His bones creaked and cracked, his muscles seemed to be ripping and healing over and over again, He was basically in indescribable agony. He also felt in the pit of his stomach Tommy’s cum starting to bubble, churn, and what felt like spreading all over the inside of his body. The worst of the pain was originating from his dick as it felt like someone had strapped it to one of those medieval torture devices that stretch you till you break. Though all the pain he somehow had an orgasm and he cummed on his stomach, but his body temp was so high the cum literally evaporated as soon as it touched his skin. The pain was too much for Dante to bare and he blacked out for the second time. Leaving his body to be reformatted at the DNA level while he dwelled in the realm of unconsciousness.
Dante awoke to find his self naked and his body drenched in sweat, disgusted he whipped some of it off. Dante decide to take a shower and was about to leave his room when he notice two things: 1. He was taller than he was yesterday, and 2. His Dick had gotten huge, he was soft at the moment but his dick was at least 7” long and lot thicker. Dante took a closer look in the mirror, he marveled at the changes that had taken place over night: His strawberry blonde hair was a lot longer and shaggier than it used to be, his baby face had gotten a little more mature but he still looked rather young, he was taller –yesterday he was 4’9” now he was 5’10”, his body was now more toned and cut- but it still kept its childlike softness. But the piece of the resistance was his dick– it had grown from 4” hard to 11” hard in one night, though it wasn’t as thick as Tommy’s was. At the thought of Tommy, Dante check his ass. It was as if Tommy had never raped him, the only evidence it had happen was now dripping out his butt. At this Dante realized he had been holding something in, he relaxed his butt muscles and let it out. Dante later regretted not releasing it over the toilet as about a gallon of cum poured out his ass and onto the floor. As relief wash over him Dante remember what Tommy said to him “this is a gift”. So that’s what he meant thought Dante as he explored his new body in the shower- especially examining his new cock, balls, and a brand new red pubs. Dante was so happy with his new body that he didn’t mind the crescent moon scar on his left shoulder-from where Tommy had bit him. After about an hour of “showering” Dante got dressed and went down for breakfast only to be met by his mother. “Wow someone hit a growth spurt” his mom said with a smile, taking in the new him. Dante smiled back and said “Mom you don’t know the half of it”.
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2010-12-10 14:24:13
It was ok until Tommy did was was physically due to the foot long cock!

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2010-07-03 10:30:10
Very good. Read both and can't wait for a third

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2010-06-10 01:02:07
break the para graphs. I'm sure you know it take longer to write than to read unless you can flow in a trace, so re- read and add details, and paragraph breaks.

and label this gay unless one of these guy actually FUCK racheal


2010-06-07 19:29:23
Would love to hear some comments so I know what to improve to make the story better

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