A love story between a mother and son. Please critique my story not grammatically but for content and if you like the story line.
My dad died when I was still in my mother’s belly and she lived as a single parent. She had kept her maiden name but I took my father’s surname which became so convenient to me when the time came.

It all started when I was 7 years old and I saw my mother naked in the shower. She saw me looking at her and I could tell that she did not mind the audience. She washed and focused on her supple breasts and furry pussy, but at age 7 I did not know what she was doing all I knew is that I liked it. I became more and more attracted to her and soon found ways to get into bed with her and cuddle. When I got into bed for the next few years I would pretend to be asleep and my hand would accidentally land on her pussy and I will gently caress it through her panties. My beautiful mother did not want to wake me so she allowed it. I could feel how wet she was getting and talking to friends about it I found out women only got wet when they enjoyed the touching so I knew I was doing a good job. I knew mom dismissed my caress because she thought I was asleep but I was wide awake enjoying it as I knew she enjoyed her pussy being caressed. When I was 9 she started to lactate and it was very painful for her. I was sad at seeing the pain my mother was in and how much more pain the breast pump she was using caused her.

I asked my mother “mom can I do anything to help you? I cannot bear to see you in pain!” My mother said, “Son I do not think you can really help.” After a few weeks she visited her doctor and came back and said, “son I have a very inconvenient task for you” my mom looked so sad and troubled when she asked so I asked her “what is it mom?” she said “son the doctor told me that if I could get someone to manually suck my milk out it should be less painful for me. I am so embarrassed to ask but, will you please suck the milk out of me” I was so shocked that I will get to taste my mother’s wonderful nipple. The same nipple that fed me when I was a baby I will now get some sort of satisfaction and I planned to enjoy every moment of sucking my mother’s sweet nipple. Without any hesitation I said “yes mom, yes I will love to help. For the past nine years and who knows how much years to come you will help me so I will help you with your situation now.” “Thanks son I owe you.”

So for the next two years or so until I turned 12 our nightly routine was me getting to suckle the most wonderful breasts of my mother and I enjoying every moment of it and falling asleep by her side cuddling me and gently rubbing the top of my head. As I got older and more mature my mom felt so embarrassed by me sucking her and even more embarrassed that she was getting horny and wet when I did it. She really stopped when she realized that I was becoming more and more aroused and she did not want anything to happen between us of a sexual nature I was her damn son of course.

As the time went by I did my norm and mom did hers but what she did not know was I used to sneak peeks at her beautiful body and masturbate thinking about having my beautiful mother. In my teen years I never really had a girlfriend by choice as I was waiting for the love of my life my own mother.

My mom always questioned me “why don’t you have a girlfriend? Are you gay? What are you waiting for?” I was already 18 when she started questioning my sexuality but every time she asked I always replied “don’t worry mom, I am just waiting for the love of my life and she will know it when the time is right” she would reply “alright son you know what is best for you.”

I’ve seen her photos, when she was about 25 years old some of them in the skimpiest bikinis that always gets me so horny that I realize her beauty only became sweeter with age like the finest wine in the world and although may find her breasts to become more saggy it just made me want to have them more.

When I turned 21 she noticed I was looking at our neighbor’s 9 year old daughter. It was true I was fascinated by the sweetest little girl that I ever saw. I started talking to the girl and started feeling her I would sneak peaks at her bare chest through her clothes and sometimes she may have on a wet t-shirt so I could see the imprint of her little 9 year old auroras. I would always think about how I was cheating on my mother and will find myself going into my mother’s bedroom and going through her underwear draw and sniffing the aroma of her pussy.

My mom was so concerned with my love life and knew I was looking at little girls especially our neighbor’s daughter that she arranged a surprise for me when my girl next door turned 10. Apparently our neighbor’s were open sexually and wanting their daughter. Our neighbors did not want to take their daughter’s virginity but wanted someone outside to prepare her, so my mother volunteered my services.

That night I got home from work my mom took my bag and escorted me down the corridor to my bedroom and opened the door. The lighting was dim and scented candles lit the entire room. My mom handed me two little blue pills and told me to take them. When I took them my mom shouted “he is ready, come out, come out wherever you are!”

The next thing I knew it was my neighbor came out. She was wearing a sweet see through baby doll nightgown and her flat chest looked so tasty with her two tiny auroras of her barely there nipples glistened through her nightgown and the pills were working that I could feel my regular 8 inch tool has risen to at least a foot long. Then my little girl helped. While the sweet little girl took off my pants, my underwear went with them. Then the little girl took her tiny hands and could barely wrap them around my cock and started gently caressing and pumping it. As she saw the first sign of cum she put her mouth on the head of my cock and started to gently suckle and lick it. My god being pleasured by a girl so young felt so wrong but yet it felt so good but in the back of my mind I was really thinking about my mother. I looked down at my 10 year old beauty realized her underwear was edible so I gently pulled them off with my teeth and I took one half into my mouth and she took half into her mouth and we ate it until our mouths met. I had never kissed anyone so I shared my first kiss that night and it was not only that girl’s first time it was mine.

I was in so much of pain and I knew that my girl was in even more. My cock could not even fit in that sweet tight pussy and I could hear the shrieks of pain from under me I wanted to stop because I was in so much pain myself but I kept thinking about this could be my mother under me and I was taking my mother which kept me going. I started screaming “I love you mama, I love having you.” I knew my mom could not hear me so I enjoyed taking this girl while really lusting after my mother. I soon felt the body under me collapse and when I got off her I was so stiff I could not move properly. I looked at her vagina and I could see spots of blood I was frightened but I knew that it was how it was her first time there would be blood and it was mine I also had a bloody cock. I was ashamed that I had sex with such a young girl but I thought of it as a sexual experience to get myself ready to take my mother.

After my first night with my neighbor it was also my last as her parents rather have that girl all to themselves and I was back on thinking of ways I could have my mother. I as usual kept on sneaking peaks of her and masturbating and sniffing her underwear. But 5 years later when I turned 27 that all changed and it was finally time for me to take my mother.

It was my 27th birthday and I decided to take my mother on a little vacation. I took her to a cozy little townhouse where we could be alone and could really talk where no one knew us. That night I took her for dinner and dancing. When we were dancing I gently squeezed and caressed my mother’s beautiful behind she squirmed and pulled away so I asked her to sit down. We went back to our table and chatted. “Mom you know that I never had a girlfriend right?” “Yes son I know, you said that you were waiting for the love of your life.” “Mom I have a confession, I was really waiting for the right time to tell you that…hmmmm…” “Yes son you can tell me, I would not judge you.” “I love you mom” “I know that son.” “No mom, I am in love with you mom!!!” “I know son” my jaw dropped, I was stunned I stuttered “ did you know.” “Son I am your mother I am not stupid. You think I did not know you looked at me in the shower or how you masturbated into my underwear, I did and I loved eating even your dry cum and I especially loved when you screamed for me when you were having a 10 year old girl. I wondered what took you so long to try something after that night.” I was dumbfounded and elated that my own mother wanted me.

It was not long before we arrived back to our townhouse we made sure to draw all the curtains and lock every door. We could not get naked quite fast enough when my mother pounced on me and we shared a sweet French kiss that made my tongue tremble. I lifted my mother up although she was heavy and I almost fell holding her I knew it was time for me to become a man finally and this time I will really lose my virginity.

I could not wait to take this 49 year old woman and invade the hole that was my passage way to this world. She was not my mother that night but my lover. She said “it is time to see and for me to measure if your penis looks as sweet as it did when you were a child or how much sweeter it is now.” she felt my cock “damn son you are huge” She stroked my balls and cock. “Oh mom” I moaned. “I have dreamt of this moment since I was 7 years old.” “Me too son, me too.” She lay on her belly. She kissed and gently kissed and caressed my cock with her tongue. With few more licks, I cummed and started to spew my juices, she didn’t expect it so soon but I came hard and fast for my mother. Mom started to drink it as fast as she could and she made sure she did not miss a drop. “Son you are so sweet. If you did not know you are the first man I had since your father.” I was so pleased to hear that I asked mom to turn around and bend over. My instinct intervened and I gently started to insert my cock into my mother’s pretty ass. I held her waist and started to gently buck my waist. “Son that feels so good” she moaned. I started to make my rhythm harder and faster and my mother’s moans came louder she yelled “I love you son, make your mother your sex toy.”

I loved that I pulled out of her ass and flipped her over so I could get to her pussy. I could not help the pain of my cock I was feeling but damn it hurt so good. I was finally having the woman of my dreams. I was finally having my mother. As I entered my mother’s sweet canal from which I came I felt both scared but excited. Mom said “go ahead son make me feel like a woman again and not just your mother.” As my cock entered her she screamed “oh god son! Yea! Oh... Ah... Oh... Ah! Give it to me!” I filled my cock into mom’s pussy. Licking her breasts (almost 20 years later), kneading them. No milk this time I screamed. “Ahh! I love you mom! I want you! I need you!” For that entire night I sexperienced my mother and enjoyed every moment of it.

The next morning we decided to do the unthinkable. When I was gently awakened by my mother sucking my cock and after my blow job we showered together kissing, touchingf and feeling each other love truly surrounded us. After our shower we got ready and went downstairs for breakfast. I had bought a ring for my mother since I was 16 and I decided now is the time to spring it on her. At breakfast I knelt down at the table and said, “Mom I love you, you have loved me through the last 27 years and now after what we shared last night I know the right thing to do is marry you so I ask…will you marry me?” Mom was not expecting that but with tears in her eyes she replied “yes son” “I will marry you.” We kissed so passionately I enjoyed tasting my mother’s sweet lips and my tongue invading her mouth. That night we found a place to do a quickie wedding and thank god she kept her maiden name that no one suspected a thing. Soon we changed our relationship from mother and son to husband and wife.

Now the third time for me to have sex it was with my wife and it felt so good consummating my marriage. For the rest of the vacation my wife and I had so much sex I cummed in her slit and I suckled her pussy and the juices that sprung was sweeter than any honey I had ever tasted. I enjoyed orgasming to my mother and she enjoyed orgasming for me. The mother and son line no longer existed it was just man and wife. We had so much sex for the rest of that week we did not realize at her age she could still get pregnant. When we got back home mom moved into my bedroom and we were having so much sex that strangers in our pda’s did not even realize we were mother and son.

A month passed since I made my mom my wife and she started feeling sick so she visited the doctor and we found out that in 8 months we will be proud parents. I was so ecstatic that I was going to become a father that my mother became the center of my universe. We were not allowed to have penetration after her 4th month but the oral sex was so unbelievable that I had sex with my mom/wife in her mouth and she enjoyed eating my cum and I enjoyed giving her cum.

After nine months my mom/wife and I had a sweet beautiful baby girl and even at birth I knew my daughter would so desirable for any man but my mother was the one who I wanted. My mother and I could not have sex until a month our daughter was born but as soon as we were able to, damn the sex got even better. I loved my wife and soon enough my wife but by the time my mom was 52 she was diagnosed with cancer. Soon the one thing that caused so much pleasure between my mother and I became so painful for her. I started to realize how sweet my daughter looked and she was looking more and more like her mother everyday which made me want her even more but I could never cheat on my mother my wife but I did not realize my mom had plans for me and our daughter…

If you like this I will write a story … my daughter my lover….


2014-11-29 17:39:01
It was Good until you went into the child porn I Don't like to read about that so I gave you a - rating:

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2014-02-05 04:27:42
I do not approve of a man taking his daughter until she is of legal age, no matter what. Underage, not at all.

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2013-07-20 01:11:48
um royhornydaddy I made an account but didn't log in (too lazy) but I think 1 writer to another the rules for a story state no pedophilea or account is banned stories deleted

anonymous readerReport

2013-01-18 23:34:01
Hey roy, fuck the nay say. I love writing and reading, and one of the most important things when writing is to appeal to the intended audience. You nailed it my good man. To those below me: yes, suspension of belief IS important, but to rag on someone ON A SEX SITE for improper grammar is so absurd it borders on retardation. And no, you aren't making yourself sound any smarter by pointing out his flaws. Those that are willing to see past such errors in order to connect to the story are. That being said, Roy, you transcended all the "Hemmingways" on these boards by providing exactly what this site is made for: a short, good story filled with passion, lust, and a decent helping of innocence. Good job, I'll be keeping an eye for future developments.

anonymous readerReport

2012-05-06 07:38:11
the idea is good but the execution of it is quite shitty. 9yr olds dont have that much of a grasp on grammer or manners. the interchange in the second paragraph sounds more like a business exchange than mother and son talking to one another, from a western view point anyway. The set up isnt very well done and the flow is way off. There is no explanation as to WHY she is suddenly lactating or anything else to give the plot substance. Proof reading and drafts of your writing would do well for the quality of your work. The saddest part is that this story got 90+ rating and shows the poor expectations of the users of this site.

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