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This is an act of fiction. It may seem to start slow but I hope the fallowing chapters will make it worth it.

It was summer and school was out, and in this small rural community that meant a lot of bored teenagers. It was a farming town and there was work that had to get done but with the advent of new technologies even it was boring.

I had a girl friend named Tess, and man was she a hotty. 5’3” 115# green eyes and C cup breast, she had a permanent pout to her mouth and always seemed to be so innocent. Her family had moved down from Michigan to Texas a year ago and we had gotten together shortly after. For her fifteenth birthday her dad gave me fifty bucks and said to take her to town and give her a good time. I was seventeen and had my drivers license and a pick up truck which until today had not been much help in getting alone time with Tess as her dad had always made a strong effort to keep me and her out of it.

When I showed up to get Tess she was all dolled up in a new sun dress and her mom had helped her do her hair man was she beautiful. Not being a fool I got my ass out of the truck and walked up to the house and shook dads hand and tipped my cap to her mom and told her how good she looked.

“When do I need to have her home?” I asked her dad.

“Midnight will be fine, I will wait up for you two.” he said looking me straight in the eye.

Now the look in his eye got my attention, it was very serious but there was something around the edges that made it strange, “Yes Sir, no problem, and thanks.” I turned and stepped off the porch and offered a hand to Tess to help her down and smiling she took my hand as we walked the short distance to my truck her dad fallowed and stopped at the drivers side door. I continued around with Tess to the passenger side and opened her door and got her seated then headed back around to where dad was waiting. He offered his hand again and said” Treat her good and you will not be sorry.” and handed me an envelope. “Yes Sir I will treat her well, I really like your daughter Sir.” I stuck the envelope in my shirt pocket and got in my truck and off we went. Half a mile down the road was a left turn that took us straight to town and out of sight of her house Tess wasted no time in sliding across the seat to set next to me.
“Damn girl you do look good.” I said as I tilted down and kissed her on her mouth. And man did she kiss back and as she pulled her mouth away she ran her tongue across my upper lip and smiled which went straight o my pants. “Hey Tess you’re gonna make me have a wreck, and I just told your dad I was going to treat you like a lady.”
“No you said you where going to treat me right.” she said, as she ran her hand up my leg. I had never gotten past first base with this girl and was starting to get confused which she could see on my face.
“Look in the envelope.” she said through a big smile and with a fiery twinkle in her eyes. I took the pakage from my pocket which I had assumed had the fifty dollars in it and opened it, there was two twenties and a ten in it but there where also several condoms. I got on the brakes and pulled over to the side of the road. “ What the hell Tess?”

“I want you to be my first and I told Mom and she told Dad and now we are alone on our way to town, you do want me don’t you?’ there was panic in her eyes. “Yes Tess I want you, this just caught me off my guard. What’s the money for?”

“It’s for a Motel room, I didn’t want it to be in a truck, worried about getting caught by some farmer or anything.” I could see she was blushing now.

“Okay, then I guess we need to get to town and get us a room.” I put the truck in gear and headed for town, we had our choice of motels right on the hi-way, but I new of one in town that was an old fifties style that was set up with each room as its own little building. I parked on the side and walked around to the office door and the clerk took my twenty-five bucks and gave me a key, smiled and said, ”Don’t make to big of a mess in there.”

In the room Tess seemed to get shy again, but that as okay with me as her pout had come back and her cheeks where flushed making her a sight to remember. My cock was rock hard and had been for several minutes. Tess would not be my first but she was the first that had asked for it so plainly. “Tess what made you want to do this and how did your folks get involved?”

“You remember Chelly?” she asked as she squirmd on the edge of the bed.

“Yes she was my girl before you, why ?”

“Well she and I are friends and she told me about the things you did for her and how you where always so nice and that she got to cum almost every time you two did it, Mom was eaves dropping and heard me say that I was going to go all the way with you. She did not want me pregnant or disappointed so she set this up with dad, and here we are.” she looked me straight in the eyes and said, “ I really want this bad and I want it now I just don’t know what to do, I mean I know what to do I just haven’t done it before and ……” As she trailed off looking lost for words I bent down and kissed her on her mouth and placed my hand on her cheek. She responded by kissing me back and opening her mouth just a small bit and pressing into my kiss. I was so turned on that slow and easy was not looking very likely. I slide my hand down her cheek and onto her shoulder where the straps for her sundress where tied and pulled the string, the knot slid undone like silk as I broke our kiss. Tess opened her eyes and looked up at me with a glaze in her eyes. I took hold of the other strap and slowly pulled the end of the string, and again there was no resistance from the knot or from Tess. The top of her dress slide down slightly revealing her soft white cleavage and showing her swollen nipples through the cotton material, I could have came right then. Instead, I removed my own shirt and dropped it on the floor.


2013-04-24 16:15:07
That's like saying you have my permission to screw my daughter.


2013-04-24 16:14:01
Very good start. I love that Dad furnished the condoms.

anonymous readerReport

2013-04-19 18:08:07
Nice beginning, now on to part 2...Would love to see it get much rougher and abusive for hot young Tess before she makes it home at midnight...And then have her father take and use her as well...

anonymous readerReport

2011-07-30 22:23:42
A vary good start. should have been longer. Hope part 2 is more detailed. Also hope it gets to be a darker storie.

anonymous readerReport

2010-08-29 19:04:57
?? Yes andddd ??? AFTER

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