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i posted this once but it got deleted anyway hope u enjoy
this is a story how my life changed forever
I’m Lana . I’m 10 I’m going to tell you how i was changed into a death angel in other words i am a vampire this happened 2 years ago

part 1
the day started out so nice it was a mid summer day and i was tanning out by the pool in my bikini. then i heard my mom calling me in the house for lunch but what i didn’t know was in the shadows a creature was watching me. i went to my room after that so i could get some 'relief' from the wetness in my bikini bottom that is when i looked in my brothers room and seen my brother rubbing one out on his bed. i thought it would be so sexy if he were to fuck the shit out of me with his 9 inch cock but decided to go to my room to rub my little cunt. at only ten i still had my virginity and i was blossoming into a beautiful young woman . i was a early bloomer as my mom was at 10 . but my body was sexy at only ten i had 32 b cup breasts, curves in the right places and an ass was pert and firm
so i went to my room and locked my door and pulled my bikini off
as i started to rub my little clit it was like my pussy was on fire so i inserted a finger into my hot slit as i did so i hit my hymen as not to tear it i made sure to only go so far. my left had went to my nipple teasing it till it was hard
as i did this little did i know the creature was outside my window in the shadows watching me fondle myself
i started to feel the pressure build up as a orgasm was about to rip through my body so i stated to finger my pussy harder and faster and then it was like a flood of pleasure rushing through my body shook from the orgasm.

part 2
as i lay in my bed with only my t shirt and panties on i felt uneasy as i lay there it felt like someone was watching me, so i went to my computer and look up vampires as i was fascinated by them
i started to feel sleepy so i turned off my computer and went to bed I fell asleep

I suddenly awoke not knowing why but i opened my window to get some fresh air
so i laid down in my bed again I wished to become a vampire i thought it would be so cool to be able to fly and have so many powers !!
then i heard a voice in my head and it said " don’t be scared i have heard your thoughts and i can make your wish come true " i said " who are you " and the voice said " i am one of the few vampires left in the world " so i said "so can you turn me into a vampire " the voce said " yes i can turn you, but in return you must bare my child " i said " but i can’t i haven even started to have my period yet " and the voice said " i have the power to make your body able to bare a child " and I said " and then my parents will notice that my belly is bulging out " so the voice said " they will only see you as you are now, as that is how powerful I am”

so i thought about it for a minuet and said " i guess i could bare a child for you , ok lets do it" and the voice said " just say Andrew and ill appear "
so i said " Andrew " and right in front of me he appeared he was handsome he stood 6' 1" with hot sexy muscles and i could see a tent in his pants
he told me to take off my clothes i was nervous so i did it slowly
then he took off his shirt and pants
then he told me to lie down on my bed as he got on top of me then i seen his cock it had to be at least 10 inches , he lined up the head of his dick with my pussy which I now felt was wet , very wet
he pushed his head just past the lips of my slit he came against my cherry and he told me it was going to hurt like hell for a minute i told i know and told him to take it slow
as he started to push he big cock inside me i felt him pushing against my cherry and then it tore it felt like a hot nail in my pussy i started to cry
he told me to hold still until the pain stopped
then i told him the pain was almost gone so he started to push in and pull out it felt like bliss
he got to the point where he was all the way to the hilt of his dick oh god i was so tight but it felt so good his dick was so big and so hot
and then i felt that felling , i was going to cum
i told him i was cuming and he picked up the pace as a orgasm shot through my body
my pussy muscles clamped down on his big dick but he still pounded into me like a jackhammer
oh god it was so good, then i gasped as he grabbed my left tit and started to play with it as he pinched and rolled my nipple between his fingers

and all of a sudden i felt that feelining i was going to cum again
i told him i was going to cum and he told me he was close too
had the he came and shot load after load of hot gooey cum which in turn sent me over the edge

after we both came down from our orgasms he asked me " are you ready to become a vampire " i hesitated for a moment and said o…..ok

we started to kiss passionately as our tongues meet his entering my mouth and mine entering his

then he slowly started to kiss my neck so gently so my mind was at ease

then i felt his fangs scratch my neck so I prepared myself

then i felt his fangs go deep in my skin and the pain took hold i let out a silent scream and slowly faded to black

when i awoke the next morning i thought i must have been a dream so i went to the bathroom and peed then i looked in the mirror and i felt my neck then i seen 2 little puncture holes and said to myself it was real it did happen

and all of a sudden i felt the baby in my belly move

i said to myself god i hope it happens again

then i had a craving a craving for blood i thought to myself shit i need some blood

then a idea came to me im going to sneak into my brothers room and drink from him

so i went to his door and silently opened it he was still sleeping and it was 7:30 in the morning i crept up to him and i felt my fangs come out they were sharp and about half an inch long
i could smell his blood in his veins so i went slow as to not wake him and then i sank them deep into his neck i felt him jump and then he went limp
as i drank i sprayed what i guessed was a mix of venom and ant coagulating serum in to his neck, whose blood was like a mix of sweet and bitter but i loved it then i was finished i pulled my fangs out and crept back to the bathroom i cleaned the blood off my teeth and lips and noticed my completion was pale but not too pale

as i went on about my day but all day i was wondering if i would see Andrew again

to be continued???????

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Anonymous readerReport

2017-02-09 14:33:54
Are you ten?

anonymous readerReport

2011-08-24 02:39:45
Don't continue. That was horrible!

The grammar, the character, the irrealism, even if it is fantasy... It sounds like it was written by some Twilight fangirl vampire wannabe.

How fucking old were you when you wrote this?

0/10, has no potential and isn't fit to be on the site. It isnt the concept but the way it was written.

anonymous readerReport

2011-04-17 10:46:22
good but you need a better introduction

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