I was so scared as I got dressed and followed Keith and Mr. Steel out into the cold night air.
Tommy by Tom Cup

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This story is part of the Tommy Series: Book 1 Mr. Steel; Book 2 Growing up; Book 3 Returning Home

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By Tom Cup
Book I: Mr. Steel
Chapter 1

It happened on my seventh grade camping trip. I was assigned a cabin with the supposed "good" boys. They were assholes and thought it funny to wet my mattress. Mr. Steel moved me to another cabin. When I got there, it was almost lights out. As soon as Mr. Steel exited the room, it was decide that we would play a game.

Keith had the bunk above mine and went first. A sheet was placed over his body. We wrote down an item of clothing he was wearing. He had to guess what we had written. If he guess wrong, he had to take off whatever he said.

Well, he kept guessing until he was nude under the sheet. We laughed as we told him it was the sheet and pulled it from him. He just stood there nude, with a hard-on and said, "I don't care if you see me naked." That’s when we heard Mr. Steel yelling, "lights out!" Keith just grabbed his clothes and jumped into his bunk still nude.

I was almost asleep when Keith reached down and shook me. He asked if I liked what I saw. I answered "Uh, yeah." He then whispered, "Man, I still have a hard-on. Do you?" Well, when he said that, I got one. The next thing I knew he was saying, "Let me see!" and reaching down to feel my cock. I’d never felt anything more wonderful.

The door suddenly opened and Mr. Steel came in waving a flashlight. We both turned over like we were asleep. Mr. Steel looked around quickly and left.

I heard Keith whisper, "Come up here".

So I climbed into his bunk. He was still naked and his body was so soft and warm. He took off my jammies and my underwear. Then he took my hand and put it on his cock. It was hot, hard, and soft all at the same time. He showed me how he liked me to move my hand, slowly up and down. I was doing this for a little while before Keith moaned and again grabbed my cock. We stroked one another for a time: both your cocks hardening. Slowly Keith pulled my hand away and said, "I want to show you something."

He started moving around and I thought he was looking for something but then I felt something wet and warm on my cock. He had my cock in his mouth. I was laying still and he was sucking me as he began to feel my ass. He licked my balls and his tongue went down to my ass. He pushed my ass up some and started to lick it. I let him: afraid one of the other guys would wake up and catch us if I made any sound. He came up and lay on top of me and asked if I liked it. I told him I did.

"Can I do more?" He asked.

"Yes but quiet," I answered.

“Okay,” He said and told me to lie on my stomach.

I had been playing with myself for quite awhile before that night. When I was nine-years-old, I slept over Billy’s house. He was a poor kid that no one really liked at school. I had just moved to town with my Mom and Dad. Dad was in the military so we moved around a lot. So I was happy to have a new friend. That night Billy showed me a small magazine that had sex stories in it. The next thing I know he has his pants down and was pulling on his cock. I sat listening to him read stories about girls with big boobs and guys fucking cunt, but it was watching what he was doing to his dick that really turned me on. Before that night was over, I had learned to jack off and had even jacked Billy’s dick for him. Billy and I would play together a lot before he moved away at the end of sixth grade.

Keith turned me onto my stomach and moved in on top of me. I felt the hard tip of his cock playing around my crack as he was trying to find my hole. I knew what he was trying to do but for some reason wasn’t afraid. I moved my ass a bit to make it easier to find and then I felt it go in. The feeling shocked me and I gasped, as I heard Keith moan. I tried to relax but tensed in reflex to the pain. Then I felt a 'pop' and God did it hurt. Keith kept moving and the pain lessened. I started to enjoy the feeling. My dick was growing harder. I could feel his weight on me: the warmth of his chest on my back. He was humping me slowly but getting deeper in my ass. All of a sudden the door opened and Keith roll off of me. Mr. Steel was in the room again with his flashlight. It took me a second or two to realize he was talking to us. We had to get dressed and come with him. Some of the guys were now awake wondering what was going on. I was so scared as I got dressed and followed Keith and Mr. Steel out into the cold night air.


We found ourselves in Mr. Steel's cabin. He was yelling at us and asking, "What the hell do you think you were doing!" and "I should call your parents." Keith said, "Mr. Steel, we're sorry. We were just fooling around and we'll never do anything like that again." I was terrified and could only nod with tears running down my face. My mom would beat the shit out of me if she found out; and I couldn't even imagine what dad would do. Mr. Steel told us that he was going to separate us from the other boys for the night. I was to wait in his cabin and he would get Keith settled in the infirmary.

When Mr. Steel came back, I was still standing in that same spot. I was so scared. He sat down looking at me for the longest time. Then he told me to sit down and that he wasn't going to tell my parents. I sat listening as he told me that he expected such behavior from Keith but not from me. We were both quiet for a long time. Finally, he asked if Keith was my friend. I told him about the game and how things got started. He nodded and asked if I liked what Keith and I were doing. I started to cry but nodded yes. He put his arms around me and kept saying it would be all right. He was rubbing my back, which quickly made me feel better.

I always liked Mr. Steel. Basically, because he always took my side when the bigger guys picked on me at school. And even now, he was making me feel better. I was getting tired but I liked the way Mr. Steel was making me feel. It was then that he picked me up and carried me to his bedroom. I just hung onto his neck.

He laid me gently in his bed. He ran his hand through my reddish blond hair and tucked me in; and then turned to leave the room.

"Mr. Steel," I said. He turned slowly. "Where you gonna sleep?"

"On the couch, " he said, turning and walking out of the room.

I lay there for a while thinking about things; about Keith, the way Mr. Steel had made me feel. All the time, playing with my cock. Finally, I got up and went into the other room. Mr. Steel was sitting and staring out of the window. He turned and looked at me as I walked into the room.

"Can't sleep," I said quietly.

He motioned me over. I went over and sat on his lap, put my arms around his neck, laid my head on his shoulders, and closed my eyes. He seemed a bit shocked at first but in short order he relaxed and held me in his arms. I moaned as he rubbed my back. I really liked that, and adjusted myself closer, and began rubbing his shoulders and neck. I could feel that his dick was starting to get hard and mine was already there. He began to push me away but I held on tight and kissed his cheek. He again relaxed. He looked at me and asked, "You really want this, don't you?"

"I like doing things," I whispered.

"Someone could find out, you know?" He said.

"I won't tell anyone." I replied.

He thought about that for a while and then asked, "What do you want to do?"

I kissed him. I liked kissing him. I like looking at his mouth. He had a kinda pouty bottom lip that was really red. He smiled and kissed me back and asked again, "You sure you won't tell anyone? You know I could get in a lot of trouble."

"I won't tell, promise." I assured him.

I took his hand and put it on my crouch so he could feel my cock. He played around with it for a while as we kissed. His hard cock rested teasingly on the side of my leg. Finally, he picked me up and carried me back to the bedroom.

He lay me on top of the covers this time and began removing my bottoms. My cock was standing straight up and he bent down to suck it. It didn't take long for me to start feeling a warm feeling in my stomach and balls. My cock felt like a rock and I shot my first load immediately into Mr. Steel's mouth. Oh, how warm and wet and wonderful it felt. It was like being in the most wonderful dream. When I opened my eyes Mr. Steel was lying beside me stroking my hair. "You okay?" he asked. "Yes," I said and leaped into his arms, hugging and kind of wrestling with him.

I ended up on top of him and could feel that he was still hard. His hand was on my bare ass. So I just started moving around some. "Wait," He said reaching down and slipping off the shorts, and undies, he was wearing. His cock seemed huge to me. I sat on his legs and started playing with it. He moaned closing his eyes. I moved it up and down slowly the way Keith had liked. I decided to try what Keith did to me; so I bent over and started to lick him. He moaned again and started to rub my back, running his hands through my hair. I took the head of his cock in my mouth, eagerly licking and sucking him.

Mr. Steel began to tell me things like `watch your teeth', `a little harder', and `little slower.' I listened and made adjustments but loved best was when he hummed, `mmmmmmmmm.' I knew I was giving him the most pleasure when he said that. So I remembered what I was doing, and how, and repeat it again the same way later. I was getting a lot of mmmmmmm's when he said, "You better stop now. I'm gonna cum." I sat up on top of him and he began stroking his cock. Soon his eyes rolled back and he gave one last `mmmmmmmm;' and shot cum all over him and me. We both started to laugh. We hugged and rubbed his cum all over each other. We kissed and fell asleep in each other’s arms.

I woke to the sound of the morning half hour bell. It took me a few moments to realize that I wasn't in Mr. Steel's cabin but in the infirmary. Keith was sitting on the side of the bed looking at me and said, "Better get up you're late."

"Whaaat?" I answered, still trying to figure out what was going on.

"You're on for kitchen duty. Better hurry."

With that he finished tying his laces and darted out the door. I slowly climbed out of bed and realize that I was dress in my pjs. Mr. Steel had dressed me and carried me to the infirmary after I fell asleep. I moved slowly toward the door thinking about how great it was to be at camp. I opened the door and rushed quickly across the quad to my cabin. After getting dressed, I headed for the kitchen lodge.

I didn't see Mr. Steel much for the rest of the day. When I did, he seemed to be as cautious of me as I was of him. At the docks, we caught each other’s eyes for a moment and we both couldn't help but smile. I wanted him again in a bad way but I didn't really get any time alone with him until the last night's bonfire. I was sitting by myself at the edge of the circle, rather out of sight of the others, when I felt a hand rub my back. Mr. Steel sat down beside me.
"How ya doing?" he asked.

"OK I guess," I said.

"Why aren't you joining the others" he replied.

"Oh, they don't like me much," I said truthfully.

He nodded, slowly turning to look at me real seriously, before saying, "I do. Maybe we can get together during the summer? You know, fishing, hiking, camping... that kinda thing?"

I was smiling from ear to ear and nodding.

"OK then, "he said, "It's settled."

As he got up to leave, "Wait!" I said, "My mom..."

"Leave that to me," he said, turning for a wink and a smile, and off he went to the center of the bonfire.


2012-09-26 16:04:51
well written story, all the anonymous readers should read elsewhere if they do not like the content, it is fantasy

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2012-07-29 22:07:15
I love this story and I kno how the boy feels I get picked on alot


2012-07-29 21:38:49
I love this story and I kno how the boy feels I get picked on alot

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2011-04-23 09:49:42
This is a good story, but I don't like the leader being involved. Plus, for a 'professional' writer, it wasn't written very well.

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2009-04-17 10:05:36
Great story but you really need to give the age of the young boys in question and do they continue to have more fun with mr.steele?

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