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please comment or rate...would like to know if im any good lol
I just wanna eat your brain, slowly, piece by piece,
Loving everything about you while I enjoy my feast.
Then I gently cut you open, take your organs one by one,
First your heart, then your liver, and I think I’ll take your tongue.
Take a little of your blood and pour it in my glass,
It’s so warm, thick, and sweet,
When it comes to wine I’ll pass.
Your delicacies entice me, your skin is so soft,
I like the way it feels….I think I’ll peel it off.
Lay your skin over mine as I bite into your heart,
You said you’d love me forever, now I’m taking you apart.
You said you’d never lie…..guess that wasn’t true.
I’ll be sure your mine forever…together….me and you.

anonymous readerReport

2013-02-16 20:16:24
Creepy as fuck but it was still great

anonymous readerReport

2012-07-24 10:53:39
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2011-08-27 19:45:33
Nice poem sounds like something Hannible Lecter would write

anonymous readerReport

2011-05-29 22:36:12
Good and freakish poetry... My favorite...

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