Hey guys this is my first time writing a story tell me what you think and if should continue

Angel is a young girl. She has lived in a vault her whole life, or at least she did until her father left the vault. I should slow down, Vault 101 was always secure and people were nice to each other. You and your father lived in the vault your whole lives and knew there was a world outside but didn't know what was out there. In the vault people helped each other, there was plenty of food and water, you had friends. You have none of this outside... unfortuneitly Angel did not know this.

"Happy Birthday Angel!" everybody said
Angel smiled as she went to her 16 birthday party. All her friends were there, her dad, and some other people from the vault. People talked to her, hugged her, and she laughed at the boys at her party. Angel was beautiful, she had long, wavy blonde hair C cup tits, long slender frame and a smile that makes all guys go hard. She has never had sex yet but she does masturbate regularly, she loves the image of a guy or girl touching her breasts and pussy. She also knew exactly how to manipulate boys in to doing almost anything. She was thinking of the time with John in the bathroom with the other boy when she got snapped back to reality from her best friend Amy.
"What are you thinking about?"
"nothing come on"
She made her way to her dad to thank him for her birthday and she went around collecting gifts and cards and stuff like that barely listening.
"Hey Amy why haven't you given me a present yet?"
"Oh i will just wait till tonight come over to my place at 8"
Angel thought it was weird but didn't question it as she went back to her party. She ate her cake and went home to shower. At 7"30 she left to go to Amy's house.
"Bye dad im going to Amy's"
"don't do anything bad"
Angel loved to wear cut shorts. It showed off her ass amazingly and she loved to have guys(even girls) stare at it as she walked by. She also wore a very low cut shirt that exposes maybe a little too much cleavage but she didn't care she just like to taunt all the boys knowing she can have anyone she wants.Angel walked her way down to the main part of the vault when she was intercepted by 3 guys she knew very well. Tom, Adam, and Fred. Angel cursed to herself as her three stalkers stopped her.
"well well well what kind of meat have we got here?" Adam asked
"MMM damn you look tasty, you better watch yourself down here little girl don't want anything bad to happen now do we?" Tom asked as he stared at her.
"Fuck off guys" Angel said
"Hey you cant dress like that and not expect to get raped. Its your fault if it happens."
"what do you want?" Angel asked scared
"hmmm lets see... oh i know why don't you use your big mouth for something useful for once?"
Angel tried to back away but Tom grabbed her by the arm and pushed her to her knees.Before Angel could do anything or say anything there were three erect penis' in front of her.
"Is this your first bj Angel?" Adam asked
"Yes please dont do this"
they laughed as the grabbed her mouth and made her open and soon as she did about a centimeter Fred shoved his 7 in cock right into her awaiting mouth. she gagged quite a bit and she started crying witch only made them hornier. Adam gripped her arm and made her jerk him off and Tom did the same. After about a minute Adam ripped Angels face from Freds dick and face fucked her hard. Tom ripped her shirt and bra off and her 36 C cup breasts came shooting out and Tom punished them. HE took both tits and squashed, smashed, pinched whatever to them and Angel was desprite to get away. The only thing was she was hotter than she had ever felt before.
"What the hell is wrong with me?" Angel thought as Tom took his turn with her pretty little mouth.
"oh Fuck im gonna cum" Fred said
"me too open wide you little whore." Adam replied
Angel looked to see you dicks shooting white liquid right into her face and soon her face mouth hair and tits were covered in two boys cum and then tom came all in to her mouth witch Angel swallowed without being told.The boys left laughing the cum covered girl they left lying crying on the ground. And as soon as they left Angel took off her pants and started to masturbate.She rubbed her pussy hard and fast while playing with her tits and she loved the feeling, she masturbated to the thought of her being raped by those three boys again and she wished they were back to fuck her brains out. And she had the biggest orgasm of her life so far. She put on her thong and pants and when she looked for her bra and top she realized that they took them so she went to Amys house covered in cum and topless.
When she got to her door she knocked on it and could hear amy saying how she was late and when she got to the door she look horrified. She took Angel inside and gave her a shower to use to wash all the cum off. When she got out of the shower Amy had on a robe and asked her what happened but Angel played dumb and eventually Amy gave up.
"Oh well be stubborn, here is your present," Amy said as she took off her robe exposing her very sexy languire. And Angel knew that it was going to be a good birthday after all.

Anonymous readerReport

2014-11-13 10:59:21
Until I found this I thugoht I'd have to spend the day inside.

anonymous readerReport

2013-07-24 19:02:30
cant catagorise this as lesbian if they dont fuck and wheres the blackmail also this was quite shit my nan could do better and shes dead

anonymous readerReport

2013-07-24 19:01:43
cant catagorise this as lesbian if they dont fuck and wheres the blackmail also this was quite shit my nan could do better and shes dead

anonymous readerReport

2013-05-16 12:36:10
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anonymous readerReport

2013-04-21 22:05:49
Stupid fucking lesbians

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